Wedding Cake Woman

Wedding Cake Woman

A Poem by E.A.Rose

They had caught her.

Whispering "F**k" accidentally to the wedding cake woman

during the ceremony.

 

lavish pink lipstick, plump cheeks, and pearly dentures

the woman was almost a cake herself.

 

© 2008 E.A.Rose


Author's Note

E.A.Rose
This one isn't quite finished. I think its only the beginning. Will finish later.

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Haha for just being a beginning to something, you have a hilarious start! Really, you could build something quite humorous out of this, or even something a bit emotional. You've got one good foot in the door....
anyway
there is something about this piece that just grabs me. Keeps me entertained. I could almost see this morphing into the tale of a woman who didn't want to be married, or maybe a situation with a jealous lover watching her ex get married.
Please let me know when you finish this, I'm anxious to know how it turns out.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 28, 2008
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E.A.Rose
E.A.Rose

Subregions of Washington DC, VA



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I started writing when I was 13 years old. At that time, I was writing mostly science-fiction and short stories, in the style of my first literary idol, Rod Serling ("The Twilight Zone"). Apart from h.. more..

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