43 minutes qnd 43 seconds ago

Meh just a quick write

Forty three minutes and forty three seconds ago
The world was at peace, She came here and darkness sank in.
The monks started fighting, and the trees all turned grey.
The wind stopped it's motions and stopped the trees sway.

Her foot touched the ground and silenced the world.
children went missing and parents were torn.
Because forty three minutes ago, the world was at its norm.
Forty three seconds ago, we felt the cold turn warm.

Her voice like nails, on a chalkboard
Her eyes like lightning bolts
Her hair was alive
Her story untold.

She moved through the earth
Killing it's species
Not knowing where she came from
She made it look easy.

forty three minutes ago, I watched children playing
forty three seconds ago, I saw bodies laying
In stone, engraved on every male being....
They knew who she was...
Without even seeing,

Reviews

[krish]

r u a professional writter..........?

[Anissa Amer]

i do it as a hobby

[krish]

wow...same here ......

[Anissa Amer]

=]

[krish]

wod u be mh frnd......?

[Anissa Amer]

sure. send the request.

[krish]

great thinking.....i even ever didn't think about it........nice.

[Bob68]

Nice read. You have some good lines in here. Good work!

[Kyle SP]

Great poem

[DrD]

While I didn't understand the mechanics of the poem very well, the imagry and message compensated to the point that it was sincerely enjoyed.

[Anissa Amer]

Thank you

[Chance]

Great depiction of havoc wrot

[Anissa Amer]

Thank you

[zainul]

The impact of catastrophe that devastated "Forty three minutes and forty three seconds ago" wonderfully depicted.
Gorgeous work!

[Anissa Amer]

Aww, you!

[zainul]

Yea,the talented poet!

[Anissa Amer]

Haha =]

[nivram]

Wow differnt. Sounds like a scorn ex-wife lol!! I like the fact that it can easily be inturpeted in many ways. Mine is however an angry woman. Good write.

[Anissa Amer]

haha thanks =] It's about medusa

[luviva]

this is good.. love it

[Anissa Amer]

Thank you :)

[Sirius King]

wow great write!

[Anissa Amer]

Thank you

[Sirius King]

ur welcome :-)