Syllabus Re-Engaged

Yeah I see that syllabus re-engaged

now I drift through space an angel with no wings

An angler with no angle to catch dreams

I see screams desecrate reams of paper on the floor

I gasp

carve myself out an inch of porn to sleep soundly by the boards of four

It's floorboards or scores of scones some might call w****s

I don't implore nor goad the lord when searching for toads under stools

but still my sword is proof toadstools can fool

Shall I rule?

hand out gruel...

It's cruel, I know

to be misused, but truth be soon on the heels of lollipop ruse

Rust evolves like holograms blue

I sound out every syllable proof, so they can find me with helium loops 

Ionic iconic sonic like spill-proof hydroponics, hydraulics engage

It's hyper-soluble double solvable embolics

gullible solvent a salvo of embellished linguistics

All or nothing-north star facing holistic bumbling

a bee sting 'n' I'm fumbling for ballistic crumbling

As cityscapes scrape on vape clouds waked

I sense baste as the paste of filthy high-brows quake

Author's Note

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

*laughing* Not at the work, but at myself because I have to move my lips when I read your s**t or otherwise I miss too much!
Best line: "I see screams desecrate reams of paper on the floor" Inking screams and using reams of paper before they become coherent thought...*sigh* been there...done that!
I think we've both been out at the same time, I'm just back from a 3 week depressive episode and have much reading to do. I have to read your stuff by myself...cuz...you know...it's 'mbarrisin' to read to myelf moving my lips!
Another fine piece.
P.S. That scowl on your face - hmmph! Matches mine perfectly!

[apennylate]

I hear you on that one, been facing OVERWHELMING negativity in life... Lots of hard-knocks... But hey... At least our scowls are beautiful...! Thanks for reading, and as always, the hilariously fun insight...

[MaximumFlight]

This was a really amazing piece. Thanks for sharing it :)

[apennylate]

Of course, thank you for reading.

[emmajoy]

' I sound out every syllable proof, so they can find me with helium loops
Ionic iconic sonic like spill-proof hydroponics, hydraulics engage
It's hyper-soluble double solvable embolics
gullible solvent a salvo of embellished linguistics.. '

Put this poem in a haystick and ask me to find its needle.. would be easy as ... Nobody but you can use those phrases and make magic out of them.. tis alchemy, Silente, pure and not so simple... Yours.

Great to read, will read aloud next time when the nerves calm!

[apennylate]

A beautiful praise of my work, EJ, like always... You make me consider my own phrases of encouragement as not but a grain of salt... Not compared to the magic of alchemy... Hah... Thanks so very much

[Joey Nizz]

This is truly engaging and lines of powerful words that are gathered in an amazing piece, your choice of words have set a unique rhythm for the readers to enjoy.

Thank you for sharing this.

[apennylate]

Thank you for reading, Joey, much appreciated

[Joey Nizz]

your welcome :)

[Raven Starhawk]

Powerful and intriguing. Definitely a piece that invokes thoughts and inspiration.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Raven

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Engaging rhythm and word play.
"Ionic iconic sonic like spill-proof hydroponics, hydraulics engage"
It provokes an image of an angle flying...cosmic space...
This really takes hard work. I mean these scientific words are woven so beautifully and capture a reader's mind.

"a bee sting 'n' I'm fumbling for ballistic crumbling"
Amazing!

[apennylate]

Thank you, Taz, writing is always a type of work... Enjoyable or not, it requires effort to connect. Appreciate the appreciation muchly

[Abhishek Asthana]

It certainly draws the attention in the very beginning "Yeah I see that syllabus re-engaged
now I drift through space an angel with no wings"...
and then of course how can we resist ourselves from the magic wordplay
"" Ionic iconic sonic like spill-proof hydroponics, hydraulics engage""
truly outstanding and this one is the major proof of your unique art !! :)

[apennylate]

Thanks so much, Abhishek. You always catch my most worked on parts

[Nipplegrinder]

"Rust evolves like holograms blue ".
I'm not even sure why I like that line, so much.

[apennylate]

Me either, probably because I always imagine holograms as being blue Cortana-esque type things... Hah, thank you

[wordman]

great write,loved the theme,angel without wings

[apennylate]

Thanks, Man of Words

[Jackie]

Had hell if a vocabulary there. Im impressed. And the rhyme schemes were also quite clever.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Jackie, I always try to stretch my vocab every time I free-write