Alaskan Savage

Alaskan Savage

A Poem by apennylate
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Lemons and elephants...

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Manic erratic combative out ah-it element flippin' it rippin' it gettin' it zippin' it dippin' it imminent intricate immigrant
 Now I be sippin' it cinnamon dividend evidence elephants skimmin' it grippin' it ribbons and lemons of heavens
I'm sentient definite devilish effortless semblance of betterment
Gotta be synonyms 
Cinema sinnin' a kitten a mitten a bitter December remember avenger develop ah-leverage
A passage gadget
Passive habit
Rabid aladdin' grabbin' magic rapid' askin' for Alaskan ravage a savage maskin' gaspin' like passion baskin'
A basket is wrappin' for havoc unlashin' rations bashin' taverns
Follow the lanterns
Hollow on Saturn...
The rings are vapor craters that are tapered for able-daters
 I'm a saber ravin' a raven raidin' a labor haven
Craven vampire cravin' a safer empire
An umpire says safe pavement but its fake diamond 
The rough slimin' abidin' hidin' tridents violent
Try to dent a silent rhyme-in half a second
It's past eleven I'm bidin' my second second chance countin' islands as they pass 

© 2017 apennylate


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such an interesting piece...has such movement in it's beat, and being more about not moving, being apathetic....letting things just happen----we stand too idle these days, i believe...we need more voices to be raised in defiance of what we have become as a society....
nicely done here.
powerful.
j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Coming from you, Sir Jacob, tis a compliment of the highest accord... You are still one of the best .. read more


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Good use of words. I liked the way you compared the two unlikeliest of things: lemons, and elephants. This would be really cool to hear out loud. I love your poetry. Do you perform your poetry at poetry readings?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Is this the new movement of poetic rap? Only you can pull these mastered writes with your signature style!

Posted 6 Years Ago


You need to write a book. The poem. The short statements made me want to know and read more. Each statements took the reader to places and thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

You read and review SO much poetry... So for you to say I need to write a book is a heavy compliment.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You should. You make the words dance and you are welcome.
This is one of my favorites of yours becuz I like the way your rhymes here are more unusual & intriguing. As usual, I only understand bits & pieces, but there are definite flashes of brilliance here! You are the best one to do this type of writing since I've been on this website (2 years) *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Winks! They could mean anything... Haha... Thanks so much, Barley, glad to return and see such prais.. read more
My man. You took this to new levels. Said F that and made new ones, lol. I've read a ton of your stuff and this just crushed it. You took rhyming and named it b***h. Well played bro.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

7 Years Ago

You would like it here bro. It's small and secluded. A good place to relax and reflect. Likewise.
apennylate

7 Years Ago

I am def' going to be taking you up on this, lol... I have read some of your new stuff, it is quite .. read more
duff

7 Years Ago

Right on brother. I'm signing a lease tomorrow so you are welcome anytime. Thanks for checking the.. read more
You are a raving uniqueist.. ok, no such word, but you crack eggs and make word omelets so quickly! I've read the above twice.. have a headache now - understand a word or two of it, or, not. What there is about it is - the buzz it leaves, a journey taken to somewhere, goodness knows where but the dervish ride was exciting.

One day, please publish a manual of 'how to.. ' with your poems! Brilliant but .. can't think of the word. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Hilariously enough, EJ... If I did that... ANYONE could write how I do... As it is nothing but an ex.. read more
*sigh* I practically had to take a nap after "sounding out" this one!
You are a wizard with the rhyming of words that actually connect in a crazy non-patternish pattern...
I'm gettin' my money back on that gym membership, I just need to stand up when I read your work, read out loud and my cardio is done for the day!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

HAH, I am telling you... Nothing is needed but a stiff brew of wordplay... That is the key to infini.. read more
I feel a slow talking,
contrast to your manic words.
Smiling in the discourse.
Rapid use of words,
while beguiling,
showing your set limitations.
Some would think that an insult,
but we both should disagree.
Your words are ready to fly.

Ever write to a song?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

I have, this was written to a song, and many others... Most of the poems on here are edits of lyrics.. read more
Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

It shows. Loved it.
Such an extraordinary talent which really needs to be applauded every single time... This one was so fast specially the first half one... But the pace was finally maintained in the last stanza and it nailed it... CLAP CLAP :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you... Thank you very much, as always. The first half IS very fast... Especially spoken, heh
Savage! Again, poor me, I don't understand your high quality wordplay. I can't still draw out any meaning I mean. Though it doesn't stop me from applauding your talent to layout such extraordinary pieces. It's really catchy. Great stuff

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Ahh, Zoe, I have missed hearing you tell me I make no sense, hahaha... I jest, but seriously... You .. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thanks very much for the review, always a pleasure to read, lol
Zoya

7 Years Ago

Haha, you're welcome

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Added on September 16, 2017
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Denver, CO



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