Sacred Vapors

I'm untamed

Insane brain lame-reined in to fillet saber-lain drains

In labor I gain ravens braver than slavers able to savor gall-breaker takers

if you're in favor lets rape-her and traverse papers for diverse capers

I'm tapered

a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers

on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors

Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations

Fulmination of generations slated in gray

Painted on a submarine stage

a rage in a cage set like a face-plant

I'm like Abraham and freed the slaves of verbal-trends

I'm global-sent and vorpal-bent

but low-rent keeps me lent to the lamb

I'm slammed and lambasted

ran outta RAM by a ram slipperier than grand

By ghosts boasted most toast by the roastiest roach

I puff a roach 

roast a goat

loads of moats rowed alone

Host is over-grown

sober toned loans and blown-out foam

roam ah-doam and sloped groans

I'm holier than the boast of those ghost hosts

No tone

Author's Note

Umm... Stuff...

Reviews

[The Iron Horseman]

You're back in the groove, my friend! My favourite lines in this one are:
"a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers
on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors
Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations
Fulmination of generations slated in gray
Painted on a submarine stage".
Keep 'em coming!

[apennylate]

Thank you, Horseman, it is much appreciated

[The Iron Horseman]

You're welcome, Silente.

[Alex Ware]

This is so lively and fast paced that I have to actively slow myself down whilst reading. Great as always

[apennylate]

Do not go too slow... Heh, thank you, Alex

[Anjali]

Well the stuff, to be precise your poem is a total tongue twister!

[apennylate]

Heh, thank you, Anj

[Anjali]

You are welcome 😀

[andrew mitchell]

This read like a rap song and cleverly written as always.

[apennylate]

Thanks, Andrew

[z.chéri]

I like the rhyming and flow of this. Keep writing!

[apennylate]

Thanks, I will try, Simple!

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

This stuff is amazing! As always, well.. But I really loved it. Especially the first three lines. They're wonderful.

Love,
Vasilees.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Vas

[Mr.Writer]

Wowzers....!! Your poetry can become a race car Silente :P
It's fast paced, engaging and has lots of effort!
Plus, you have super good vocab
Well done, keep it up :)

[apennylate]

Thanks, Mr. Writer

[Mr.Writer]

No problem Silente :)

[Einstein Noodle]

whew ..try reading that in one breath! :) ..tons of sharp phrases and lines ..was able to take a short breath here:
"a rage in a cage set like a face-plant" i imagined myself in the cage and so paused automatically .. and through the whole read (out loud) i saw the poet in the dimmed, subterranean, smoke filled, "place" ... where the beats expounded and pounded and grounded ... themselves in bongo beats ;) nice read .. lots to chew on
E.

[apennylate]

... Now that is what I see, haha... This poem was actually a snippet from a verse... So you would be right in reading it out loud... If you know how to do it, this verse can actually be spoken in the "choppers" style entirely... Just a fun fact... Heh

Thanks you, Einstein

[Barbara Walker]

My favorite line, " I'm tapered
a subversive undertaker of fake law-makers." !!

[apennylate]

A good line, thank you

[Abraham George]

nice work like always before. keep writing.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Abraham