Sacred Vapors

I'm untamed

Insane brain lame-reined in to fillet saber-lain drains

In labor I gain ravens braver than slavers able to savor gall-breaker takers

if you're in favor lets rape-her and traverse papers for diverse capers

I'm tapered

a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers

on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors

Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations

Fulmination of generations slated in gray

Painted on a submarine stage

a rage in a cage set like a face-plant

I'm like Abraham and freed the slaves of verbal-trends

I'm global-sent and vorpal-bent

but low-rent keeps me lent to the lamb

I'm slammed and lambasted

ran outta RAM by a ram slipperier than grand

By ghosts boasted most toast by the roastiest roach

I puff a roach 

roast a goat

loads of moats rowed alone

Host is over-grown

sober toned loans and blown-out foam

roam ah-doam and sloped groans

I'm holier than the boast of those ghost hosts

No tone

Author's Note

Umm... Stuff...

Reviews

[The Iron Horseman]

You're back in the groove, my friend! My favourite lines in this one are:
"a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers
on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors
Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations
Fulmination of generations slated in gray
Painted on a submarine stage".
Keep 'em coming!

[apennylate]

Thank you, Horseman, it is much appreciated

[The Iron Horseman]

You're welcome, Silente.

[wordman]

word play is an under statement in this write my friend

[apennylate]

Gratitude is an understatement, thank you, Wordman

[Seeker]

Give me what you're having Silente, so I can roam the cosmos, the Earth all at once. You multitask with your poetry as life is precisely that: multitasking..."I puff a roach, roast a goat" this is vintage Silente.

[apennylate]

Nuuuu, it is alll miiine :3

Hah, thank you, Seeker, I LOVE that compliment... Vintage... Yessshhhh

[Tabby Mac]

You ryhme better than me and that is a HUGE compliment becasue I love rhyming! Your vocabulary makes me want to read a dictionary every night, for half the words you use I don't know!
Your brain is like a wonderland and that's a compliment...but sometimes I feel like an old woman...what did that whipper snapper say?! I had a hard time keeping up! I want to darn it! I'm going to read this seven more times! LOL I'm serious. I enjoy your work it challenges me! And your style is unique another awesome thing!! Keep writing your heart out!!
Tabby

[apennylate]

Haha, well do not strain your eyes re-reading... Thank you so much for the gushing appreciation... It makes me smile, and you should! But seriously, it is all just word sounds with vague references towards life and s**t... You could do it EZ PZ

[lightsong]

You will have to forgive my English which doesn't really help me to understand all Your sentences, but to me it was a try to get out, to keep Your brain sane in this shrinking drowned society, You are forced to drown too because You are a part of it, but still You know Your own self very well, how strong You are, You just dive with the drowning but rise from anger like the wave, trying to make a difference, a new voice to be heard, I like how You started Your poem because it shows how aware of You own self You really are, I'm impressed by Your rhythm here, a spirit of a rock star I feel.

[apennylate]

You amaze me with your insight... Every time... I swear, it is almost creepy... No one should be THIS good at seeing things behind the scenes, heh... Thanks, Light... Your reviews are always a highlight for me

[lightsong]

I'm sorry my friend if I'm crossing the lines anywhere or make You feel somehow uncomfortable, please let me know if I do anytime, I know I might go sometimes with my words without noticing, I just write what I feel...

[apennylate]

Nononononono... Please never stop... Seriously... I literally have HUNDREDS and HUNDREDS of reviews... With everyone trying to pin-point what each poem means... NO ONE gets even close... Not compared to you... You somehow nail it in a transcendent way. I am not kidding, it is quite surprising... But a good surprise! Always keep being you, please and thank you

[lightsong]

You are so kind to me my dear riend, thank You hundreds times*

[apennylate]

Of course, anytime, and no... Thank YOU infinity times... (plus one)

[lightsong]

You paint such a wide smile with the (puls one), I like Your humorous sense a lot :)

[apennylate]

Hahaha, why thank you, Light, dear friend... Always glad to share a smile!

[Vamsi]

Glad that i've read this poem..truly excellent work

[apennylate]

I am glad you are glad, thank you, Vamsi

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

" I'm like Abraham and freed the slaves of verbal trends...I'm holier than the boast of those ghost hosts." YES you are! Beyond Light-speed lines, electric swords piercing the night of the "Fulmination of generations slated in gray"..killer form,beat, flow, intricate rhyme pattern, cadence..Scathing social commentary- rapers, "fake law-makers- "I'm a shaker of all traitors." You are the Best at what you do, and I bow to your genius!

[apennylate]

Your reviews are more awesome than my rhymes... Haha, love your take, Annette... Truly a pleasure... Thank you, sincerely

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

No way, but You are mos def welcome and deserving!

[apennylate]

Yes way....

[Priyanshi]

Amazing work, S.
well done.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Pri, much appreciated

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like directness of the words leading to the strong ending.
"I'm holier than the boast of those ghost hosts
No tone"
You create place and character who is alive and entertaining. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[apennylate]

Thank you, Coyote, for the warm appreciation

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy my friend and you are welcome.

[Jessica Lima]

I have always envied your rhyme scheme. Catchy as always :)

[apennylate]

Envy is a pill best taken with determination... Together they can create success...! Thanks, Jessica

[Cara]

wow, Amazing i loved it
thank you for sharing

[apennylate]

Thanks, Cara, means a lot to hear