You two have made me so smile :) truth I can feel Yumna's mind jumping here and there taking the lead for Your own mind to jump after, and I'm pretty sure You liked so much the freedom it gave You, I feel real joy through the whole piece, where nothing else matter, the whole world doesn't matter!
Thank You both!
You never cease to amaze me with your work. How you come up with so many thoughts all at once to craft a cocktail so rich in images that seem unconnected, yet so real. Even when you mention oxycotin, you could have referred to oxytocin the hormone, or oxycontin the narcotic pain killer, who cares. Even though at my age I'm past this kind of rap culture, you make it so fun to read. Keep them coming friend, and give 'em hell while at it!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thanks so much, Seeker, your words come at a great time, and I really, truly appreciate them... I am.. read moreThanks so much, Seeker, your words come at a great time, and I really, truly appreciate them... I am def' trying
You two have made me so smile :) truth I can feel Yumna's mind jumping here and there taking the lead for Your own mind to jump after, and I'm pretty sure You liked so much the freedom it gave You, I feel real joy through the whole piece, where nothing else matter, the whole world doesn't matter!
Thank You both!