Cotton Anxious (Edited by YumnaKay)

Cotton Anxious (Edited by YumnaKay)

A Poem by apennylate
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Focusing on locusts...

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 I focus on
locust
hocus pocus
corpus 'n' oak'us ​- ​cloak'us
forest broken 'n' soakin'
evokin' mopin' ​; ​a rope'n elope
and slope'n​...​

​I'​m open like robes
​...​hose me down​...​
​...​hopes crown​...​
I'​m bound to sound
round my pound​,​
out of drowns​,​
so air hounds​ --​ abound​.​
I'​m loud in a cloud​,​
the ground amounts​
 to an ounce of mounds
-- and now​ --​

​I'​m bound
a bat outta hell
as​ -​ ​I​ fall and
sell myself short​ ...​ at bat​.​

​I'​m a rat​ ~​ so phat
I'​m cracked at the seams
​...​it se​e​ms​...​
my means are weaned
and lean, now sleep​
and dream​​
of eating ​​reams​.​

​T​he paper bling
that screams
as the mean king 
reaps ​-​ with ease​.​

​I'​m asleep and cream-filled​ 
​a donut​ ​still​ -​- 
​I​ will be​ --​- still​.​

​M​y will is filled
with obnoxious krill​,​
that kill and kill​...​
like the pill​​
​...oxycotin​...​
N​oxious​;​ ​I'​m
cotton anxious
forgotten angst, christ​;​

it​'​s drilled into my head
a bill of dead bits
lead to lead a message, Zed 
- in a bottle -
when will the mess begin​?​
I'​m throttled, a model citizen
and ​--- ​it ends​,​

no rest for trimmed
and
~ gobbled friends​.​

© 2017 apennylate


Author's Note

apennylate
Another superb edit by YumnaKay... If you have not already, check out her writing, it is talented work...! Thanks, and have a good one, everyone!

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You two have made me so smile :) truth I can feel Yumna's mind jumping here and there taking the lead for Your own mind to jump after, and I'm pretty sure You liked so much the freedom it gave You, I feel real joy through the whole piece, where nothing else matter, the whole world doesn't matter!
Thank You both!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Light, glad to share a smile



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You never cease to amaze me with your work. How you come up with so many thoughts all at once to craft a cocktail so rich in images that seem unconnected, yet so real. Even when you mention oxycotin, you could have referred to oxytocin the hormone, or oxycontin the narcotic pain killer, who cares. Even though at my age I'm past this kind of rap culture, you make it so fun to read. Keep them coming friend, and give 'em hell while at it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Seeker, your words come at a great time, and I really, truly appreciate them... I am.. read more
You two have made me so smile :) truth I can feel Yumna's mind jumping here and there taking the lead for Your own mind to jump after, and I'm pretty sure You liked so much the freedom it gave You, I feel real joy through the whole piece, where nothing else matter, the whole world doesn't matter!
Thank You both!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Light, glad to share a smile
Simply amazing rap.... May I call you Mr. Rapper or King of Rap!?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

You can call me whatever you would like, heh, thank you
An appreciating poem of you both friends..and such lovable work got to see here.this is a fab. edit.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Pri, I appreciate the words
Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

Hahaha...Pri... okay
My pleasure, Friend.

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apennylate
apennylate

Denver, CO



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