You two have made me so smile :) truth I can feel Yumna's mind jumping here and there taking the lead for Your own mind to jump after, and I'm pretty sure You liked so much the freedom it gave You, I feel real joy through the whole piece, where nothing else matter, the whole world doesn't matter!
Thank You both!
I must say the oxycotin part was the most fun part to read as well as edit ;)
Though you wrote it as rap, it still reads dark to me, an almost gloomy touch.
This being said, I enjoyed editing it and making my frozen brain cells run a mile on how to do it lol so thank you for that, D! (:
P.S am I allowed to blush over all the exaggerated praises by you and all the reviewers here? lol jk thanks for that too (:
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you, Yumna, glad you enjoyed editing/reading this one... Never feel bad about blushing from pr.. read moreThank you, Yumna, glad you enjoyed editing/reading this one... Never feel bad about blushing from praise... Tis the best time to blush...!
7 Years Ago
hahaha lol blushing is really not my thing :p too girly lol ;p
you're welcome, D! A pleasure .. read morehahaha lol blushing is really not my thing :p too girly lol ;p
you're welcome, D! A pleasure always (:
Quite an interesting read. I enjoyed the rhyming and schemes. And she does indeed sound pretty talanted. I'll most certainly go over and check her out as well.. Also please check me out too.. Thanks
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Of course, and thank you, been beyond busy lately, and under a bit of new-found stress... But if you.. read moreOf course, and thank you, been beyond busy lately, and under a bit of new-found stress... But if you send me a message i can absolutely get to it. I try to remember otherwise, but life is crazy!
Phat indeed, hehe. Loved the flow.
'My will is filled
with obnoxious krill,
that kill and kill...
like the pill
...oxycotin...' ??? XD. Gosh, this was so fun to read. Truly enjoyed it!