You two have made me so smile :) truth I can feel Yumna's mind jumping here and there taking the lead for Your own mind to jump after, and I'm pretty sure You liked so much the freedom it gave You, I feel real joy through the whole piece, where nothing else matter, the whole world doesn't matter!
Thank You both!
Your words danced to perfect ending.
"no rest for trimmed
and
~ gobbled friends.
"
I enjoyed this poem my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Great rhymes, another fantastic piece. Not only is the rhyming fantastic, the whole flow of the piece is exquisite. It's not just easy to read, but fun, it's just a very enjoyable piece.
-Richard
I loved this one, my friend. It's light, fast-paced and it made me smile as the images rattled around in my head. I can visualize it as a fast, screaming, jabbing guitar lick over very heavy drums, with the lyrics driving the punters crazy as they each attribute different meanings to them. Thanks for the ride!
And Merry Christmas...
Lost in translation but mesmerised in the feelings.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
This one was a throw-away verse, and literally has ZERO "translation"... So I would concur with your.. read moreThis one was a throw-away verse, and literally has ZERO "translation"... So I would concur with your statement, heh... Thank you, Andrew
Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail betw.. read moreGee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?
Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.
And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)
If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.
Regards,
-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...
(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)