Emulating Stars of Maybe

Emulating stars of maybe in May, hey baby, ray stuns and gravy

I'm alive and unfettered bravely

I'm better than wetter dogs with rabies, a slave to crazy, still jive and raving

Dime shot on sight, creeping hog tied up tight, and I'm slightly light in the pockets

Mark-it and hearken, steady ready caulk-it

Off-it like rockets I'm parkin' and stalkin' on foot at the market

I stray when I pursue loose grooves with my pick...

No-stop-it

Can't slick-pin her, hoppin' to the sloppin', and next target is barkin'

I'm farther than a garden guarded by sovereign guardians pawin' 'n' slobberin' 

Lower than drains clogged with pain runnin' on sugar-bane

Can it tame the blame that I swing wildly like a cane

Like a similie for lame, I'm lamer than lame

Now steady aim and pray we can coast today, mope and sway

Lay to rest grace, but sashay when slain

Sass and flame?

Hah...

Might as well use our brains.

Use our lanes to go nowhere, or somehere I never know, but something has to flow

Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes

The corpse is coarse, of course I'm morose

The host is boasted roast, and I'm hoisting oats to make up gropes in the dark

I'm not dark I swear I'm far from it, an ark of ravens slayin' carpets

Now the pavement calls me, need a beat-back symphony to make it...

No problem

You lay the six by me, and I'll do the farmin'

Just remember...

No sobbin' 

Reviews

[Richard McLin]

Love the line about being better than wet dogs with rabies.

This is a great piece. another one that just proves what a poetry force you are. I love writing poetry, and a few of my pieces are some of the best things I've written, but I can't force it, and it can be tricky to come up with new poems. Reading your work is truly inspiring. Thank you for that. Great job.
-Richard

[apennylate]

Thanks so much! Sorry it has taken a minute to reply! Been away for a while. Glad to be an inspiration!

[Risen]

sounds like a rap, like when musicians used to write about things with meaning and passion. Superb.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Risen, it means a lot to hear I inspire musical appreciation

[Zoya]

The way the pace slowly slows down towards the end is very much admirable. As always, didn't understand much of it, yet was very fun to read. Nicely penned!

[apennylate]

Thank you, Zoe, I did one just recently that I HOPE makes sense, so... Maybe you will have luck on that one, heh...

[Zoya]

Ohh, really? Haha...I'll check it out soon. You're most welcome.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful great interesting spellbinding love it

[apennylate]

Thank you, Julie, warmed to know you liked it

[emipoemi]

I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

[apennylate]

Thank you, Emi, much appreciated

[Surya]

No sobbing....indeed words used here re pretty good...I loved them all...:)

[apennylate]

I love all your kind words here, Surya, thank you muchly

[pragya gaur]

awEsome work...I loved it

[apennylate]

Thank you, loved the review

[Hosimone]

I read this as a rap. I loved it! I love how you write, the amount of rhyming words is incredible!

[apennylate]

You read it right, Holly, and thank you, I did enjoy the rhyming on this one...

[Hosimone]

The fact you enjoyed it really shows in this piece. I love when you can tell when someone loves their pieces just by reading them.

[apennylate]

Hmm, really... Well that is an interesting thought I had not given much time to before... Thank you, again...

[Joey Nizz]

I really liked the power you added in your words in these lines, your story was full of engagement, it made me feel the words you wrote.

Thanks for sharing buddy, another great piece to read!

[apennylate]

Thank you, Joey, stay blessed, good sir

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

no sobbin'
i love this one particular word so much..u have written really well....keep writing.

[apennylate]

Almost did not use that word, so glad you enjoyed it, thank you very much

[Illumina]

"Might as well use our brains.
Use our lanes to go nowhere, or somehere I never know, but something has to flow", I especially liked these lines.
A little hard to understand for me but it's got a nice ring to it. Good job with it 👍

[apennylate]

Thank you, May, I appreciate that