Emulating Stars of Maybe

Emulating stars of maybe in May, hey baby, ray stuns and gravy

I'm alive and unfettered bravely

I'm better than wetter dogs with rabies, a slave to crazy, still jive and raving

Dime shot on sight, creeping hog tied up tight, and I'm slightly light in the pockets

Mark-it and hearken, steady ready caulk-it

Off-it like rockets I'm parkin' and stalkin' on foot at the market

I stray when I pursue loose grooves with my pick...

No-stop-it

Can't slick-pin her, hoppin' to the sloppin', and next target is barkin'

I'm farther than a garden guarded by sovereign guardians pawin' 'n' slobberin' 

Lower than drains clogged with pain runnin' on sugar-bane

Can it tame the blame that I swing wildly like a cane

Like a similie for lame, I'm lamer than lame

Now steady aim and pray we can coast today, mope and sway

Lay to rest grace, but sashay when slain

Sass and flame?

Hah...

Might as well use our brains.

Use our lanes to go nowhere, or somehere I never know, but something has to flow

Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes

The corpse is coarse, of course I'm morose

The host is boasted roast, and I'm hoisting oats to make up gropes in the dark

I'm not dark I swear I'm far from it, an ark of ravens slayin' carpets

Now the pavement calls me, need a beat-back symphony to make it...

No problem

You lay the six by me, and I'll do the farmin'

Just remember...

No sobbin' 

Reviews

[Richard McLin]

Love the line about being better than wet dogs with rabies.

This is a great piece. another one that just proves what a poetry force you are. I love writing poetry, and a few of my pieces are some of the best things I've written, but I can't force it, and it can be tricky to come up with new poems. Reading your work is truly inspiring. Thank you for that. Great job.
-Richard

[apennylate]

Thanks so much! Sorry it has taken a minute to reply! Been away for a while. Glad to be an inspiration!

[Robert Trakofler]

Upon reading this I have lost the use of my right eyeball it spun around and is stuck looking at the cavern behind my socket where my brain used to be and now stands a for rent sign. the specific gravity of my general locale has bottomed out and my pen has floated up to the ceiling and i'm having a hard time holding on to my keyboard and typing at the same time. So i guess I will just swim up to the stars and try not to let the glare overshadow my conduction of your conduction

[apennylate]

I have no words for this one... I loved it and should be a standalone work...
Edit it, trim it, fk wit' it...
That is a damn good idea you got der
Of course...
The compliment to my writing it brings is magnificent....
We can call it...
"Ode to MIGHTY SILENTE"

[apennylate]

Oh and thanks and all that jazzzzz

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A smorgasbord of rhymes and word play and images in another colourful piece that again struck me as having the feel of a rap?

[apennylate]

Struck correctly, you are, John...
A good eye, and thanks very much for the visit

[Chris Shaw]

Plenty of rhythm here and internal rhyme. You have a wandering mind. You had me jumping from one stepping stone to another. Quite a creative journey I've been on Silente. I needed the exercise.

Chris

[apennylate]

Am glad you have taken the time to trot the steps, Chris...
I value and appreciate the journey we both take!
I, as the writer, and you...
As the reader
Thanks so much

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This is not a maybe,
Looking deeply into this humming piece.
It's has a perfect making,
And it's rhythms were flowing through free.
Wonderful conveyed,
With mind driven by a thoughtful thinking,
Emotional feelings,
And an heart that wanders across the mile intuitively.

What a beautiful combination!

[apennylate]

Oh, wow...
A sweepingly powerful review...
A beautiful thank you!
Your insight is gracious and kind-hearted....

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

It's my pleasure...

[Jade]

deep and intriguing, I enjoyed this...
Awesome writing

[apennylate]

Thanks very much, friend...
Appreciated

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Could be a rapping along with it
as one reads it.
Nice structure that is appealing to the eye.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Josie, rapping along is the best! Heh

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

you're welcome!
:)

[Cecelia A. Green]

"Sass and flame?
Hah...
Might as well use our brains."

ICONIC

[apennylate]

I tend to agree... I enjoyed writing that

[duff]

The creative flow is strong with this one. You seem to have an arsenal of rhymes on standby. Your wit and ability to captivate readers with clever ideas is quite amazing. I've always been a fan of your stuff man. Great work.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Duff, hope all is well with you, my friend...

[duff]

Anytime man. My pleasure. I'm doing great at the moment and I hope you are as well.

[apennylate]

Busy, but good. Am very happy to hear you are kicking a*s...