Sarcastic Oblivion

Sarcastic Oblivion

A Poem by apennylate
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Caustic reptilian...

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Sarcastic oblivion is a caustic reptilian
Is a cause for a million trillion billion villains to shed their skin chillingly...
Willingly still
A fed lamb on ah-grill...
Still as dams filled
A still of damnable swill...
A pill and refill the drill that will build flammable hills
With will of steel...
Tamable fields steal gullible frame from the heels of seals
Healed like veal in halls of fame...
Flames and rain
Eels in pain...
Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Abel
Disabled enabled to go down in fables heard round the stables...
Tables round and able to saddle cables
Ladles making halos...
A noble payload

© 2017 apennylate


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The words, the ambiance, the rhythm... I liked everything.
It seemed to me (at least in my mind as I read it) that the tone changed right before reading "Flames and rain", as if day turned into night and a strange deep and calm voice whispered the rest of the poem in my ears.
I loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom Aubin

7 Years Ago

It was definitely worth it so you're most certainly welcome. I'm looking forward to read more of you.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Aye, ditto, friend... Thanks you again, a pleasure
RolandDee

6 Years Ago

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail betw.. read more



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A relaxing calming flow in your words in this piece, I like the words you have written to create each line, your rhythmic play on words were perfect.

Thanks for sharing an other great work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
And yeah it kinda did, It made me write something yesterday when I was feelin.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Oh, man... Hell yeah... That is music to my ears... Please do...!
Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Well do man thanks ^^
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Vic
nice flow between like sounding words to new ones. the vowel sounds pop

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

I appreciate it, Vic... Thanks
This piece gives me a very eery, chilling feeling. Especially, "Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Able"....
As usual it is well written and very clever. I don't even know what it means yet somehow the words turn my stomach and leave me feeling somewhat anxious.

Posted 7 Years Ago


apennylate

7 Years Ago

Spot-on with the emotions, Flame... I meant for those feelings to creep in, and it seems I succeeded.. read more
Cool use of word combinations.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Stephanie... It felt cool to the tongue and mind to write...
Dude, this is amazing and mind blowing!!! :D Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us meager peasants. (throws horns)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Dude, thanks...! Thanks for appreciating, and stay metal...
Raven Moonchild

7 Years Ago

METAL RULES ALL!!!!! (THROWS HORNS)
man has raped our wildlife for centuries,it`s all in the name of greed

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Aye, that they do, Man of Words... Thanks so much for the insight
I love the play with words, all the alliteration (or is it assonance?) and interesting word combinations. I think you had fun writing this. I had fun reading it! Thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

I never know the difference between the fancy terms... I am a bit simple for that, hah... I had a ba.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

7 Years Ago

keep it up. [:
The rhythm and flow is wonderful. Some of the images fascinating and some of your word combinations just surreal. The synapses in my brain were wondered which way to fire!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Hah, thank you, Milton... Let us hope they found a good direction eventually...
you seem insane like your poetry... insanely creative. Of course, again, I understood nothing here. The insertion of rhyming words here and there makes it interesting and fast-paced to read.
"A pill and refill the drill that will build flammable hills"- a 'kill'-er line lol.
A crazy poem to read, loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Insane, eh? Heh... Again, I understand not much more than you... Crazy, though, it is indeed... Love.. read more
Zoya

7 Years Ago

My pleasure
"...Disabled enabled to go down in fables heard round the stables..."

Tall tales told by unlikely wanna-be's 'round the fire barrel?

I love your flow and I usually read out loud for the full effect. This is again, kinda mind-blowin' to this neophyte. *bowing low - droning monotone* "I'm not worthy...I'm not...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Haha... From what I see of your writing and reviews... You seem more than worthy... I appreciate the.. read more

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apennylate
apennylate

Denver, CO



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