Sarcastic Oblivion

Sarcastic oblivion is a caustic reptilian

Is a cause for a million trillion billion villains to shed their skin chillingly...

Willingly still

A fed lamb on ah-grill...

Still as dams filled

A still of damnable swill...

A pill and refill the drill that will build flammable hills

With will of steel...

Tamable fields steal gullible frame from the heels of seals

Healed like veal in halls of fame...

Flames and rain

Eels in pain...

Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Abel

Disabled enabled to go down in fables heard round the stables...

Tables round and able to saddle cables

Ladles making halos...

A noble payload

Reviews

[Tom Aubin]

The words, the ambiance, the rhythm... I liked everything.
It seemed to me (at least in my mind as I read it) that the tone changed right before reading "Flames and rain", as if day turned into night and a strange deep and calm voice whispered the rest of the poem in my ears.
I loved it!

[apennylate]

You would be pretty correct in that tone change, Tom, and thank you so much for appreciating and time taken to visit... It means the world

[Tom Aubin]

It was definitely worth it so you're most certainly welcome. I'm looking forward to read more of your writing in the future.

[apennylate]

Aye, ditto, friend... Thanks you again, a pleasure

[RolandDee]

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wonderfully written....words in this fit so well...keep it up.

[apennylate]

A wonderful review, I appreciate the time and encouragement given... Thank you, Wajiha

[Wajiha Nayeem]

always a pleasure......

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'll never look at oblivion the same way now lol...I think the title is very creative ;) :) As always your wordplay fascinates me, Silente!

[apennylate]

Thank you, Yumna...! I am glad to help change how someone looks at something, lol... Yeah, I liked it as well... Titles are never my friend...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

haha I think titles are the trickiest part or at least for me ;P You're welcome :)

[apennylate]

I thought you did the same as me... Just pick a nice looking phrase from the writing and pray people accept it, lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

yeah provided that I do come up with a write lol I've been too dry these days :~ Btw Idrc about people accepting or not ;) too arrogant haha ;p

[apennylate]

Oh yeah, I forgot... You are certainly your own person, lol...
All I write are darn lyrics that flop... I wrote this poem in like 5 minutes...All in the name of making myself feel better about the fact my musical skill is practically zero... It did not help my ego much, but at least it made me laugh...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

well I sure want to come with lyrics too but apparently not lol there were times when I did use to write in 5 mins but even that seems like a dream now haha
And I think you have the right attitude ;) write for yourself and if it makes you satisfied or laugh then job done ;) :)

[apennylate]

... You literally wrote bar for bar to match our collab'... Seamlessly and instantly, I might add... It was a bit ago, but I seriously doubt your ability to actually do it, has diminished at all... Just the spark... Sparks and muses come and go all the time... I certainly have the wrong attitude plenty... Best to chase laughter and self-joy, you are right...!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh that, well it was a while back and I used to be carefree back then lol opd is wearing me down these days and the little creativity I had is wavering away haha
You can chase it if you see it otherwise it's like grabbing smoke ;P

[apennylate]

Haha, it was like... A month or two ago...? Come-onnnnn.... You can not have had your spirit broken by some out-patients in a months time... You are too arrogant for that...! Do not take work so seriously... At the end of the day the only person who joins you in the grave... Is you... Hah, so best make sure you enjoy your own company....
But you can not grab smo.... Oh... I see what you did there...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah yeah I know but I am a kid after all just thrown out in the real world lol so it'll take time ;p
haha grave, uhm yeah didn't think that either..

Cool that I can fool ya, huh? lmao ;p

[apennylate]

Pffft, my parents kicked me out the DAY I was 18... Haha, and lots of times before that, but not officially, legally... Haha...
It absolutely takes time, you are right...
Ups and down are inevitable...
Fool me, though...
Psh, never...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Uhm well kids stay with their parents in the East so I'm stayin' a kid haha that is until I decide to marry lool
I did once, I can do it again ;) lol jk ;p

[apennylate]

Yeah... I just wanted to talk big talk... Lol
Do they really...? Hmm, lucky...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

haha and I was under the impression that you always talk big ;p

[apennylate]

Rofl... I was under the impression I silently formulated thoughts and tapped them out on a mechanical keyboard... Hugely, though, I type with hugeness of movement... So as to feel as important as possible...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

hugeness of movement? as in wrecking places all over? haha ;p

[apennylate]

... Maybe... Lmao

[Einstein Noodle]

that is quite the pan full potpourri .. a very serious theme and feel to it but fun on the tongue :) your closing two lines inspire me to be the cook with the ladle in hand ... gently stirring, stirring around and around ..a dark brew that i can not see the contents ... not sure i really want to .. so many animals ... :{
E.

[apennylate]

Thanks.... You seemed to grasp the feel for this one quite well... I wanted to be funny and light, but with overtones of serious darkness... Halos of animal parts... Haha... Thanks again

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .................

[Shasha]

This one is great! I always love to read your writings! They are unique!
Well Written, Silente!

[apennylate]

Glad you liked it, Shasha... Thanks

[Shasha]

Not a problem!

[Decidious wind]

I feel as if you should've been born during the shakespearian times. Your writing is very fruitful and colorful and the terminology is immensely complicated. You are like the shakespeare of today!

[apennylate]

Hah, well then... I can not say this review did not bring a smile to my face.... Shakespeare of our time, eh...? I do not know about that, but the comparison is certainly flattering... Thanks very much

[Lykos]

Another great one, I love the flow of your poems, the way it sounds when I read it aloud is amazing and really catchy. Well done.

[apennylate]

Thanks, Lykos, always good to appreciate spoken word flow

[Lykos]

No problem

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

This flows from the tongue with majesty sir, much enjoyed!

[apennylate]

That is what one hopes to hear, Mr. E.... Thanks muchly

[Ellie Qtz]

It's beautiful hahaha!!!!

[apennylate]

Hahaha... A beautiful review.... Thank you, QTZ...

[Hope]

Your poems are a sure sure delight Silente:)
Thanks for sharing this!!

[apennylate]

As your words are a sure, sure delight, Neetha... Thanks so much for the visit

[Hope]

My pleasure:)

[Kittenincake]

"Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Abel" - this made my jaw drop. Your word play as astounding. Your piece, a flavorful mouthful with infinite meaning.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Kaliope... Your words mean the world