Sarcastic Oblivion

Sarcastic Oblivion

A Poem by apennylate
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Caustic reptilian...

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Sarcastic oblivion is a caustic reptilian
Is a cause for a million trillion billion villains to shed their skin chillingly...
Willingly still
A fed lamb on ah-grill...
Still as dams filled
A still of damnable swill...
A pill and refill the drill that will build flammable hills
With will of steel...
Tamable fields steal gullible frame from the heels of seals
Healed like veal in halls of fame...
Flames and rain
Eels in pain...
Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Abel
Disabled enabled to go down in fables heard round the stables...
Tables round and able to saddle cables
Ladles making halos...
A noble payload

© 2017 apennylate


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The words, the ambiance, the rhythm... I liked everything.
It seemed to me (at least in my mind as I read it) that the tone changed right before reading "Flames and rain", as if day turned into night and a strange deep and calm voice whispered the rest of the poem in my ears.
I loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom Aubin

7 Years Ago

It was definitely worth it so you're most certainly welcome. I'm looking forward to read more of you.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Aye, ditto, friend... Thanks you again, a pleasure
RolandDee

6 Years Ago

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail betw.. read more



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You have got a unique way to present your poem, with beautiful use of words ,,and i enjoyed it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Priyanshi, that means a lot to hear
Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

My pleasure, friend.
This one is a bit of a puzzle...I'm not certain I get the meaning. However, I enjoyed the creative word play and your rhymes within the lines. As always, you are a step ahead in the creativity arena. Truly a masterful write. :) Julie

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

This one meant NOTHING, Jewel, so do not feel bad... I mean... Come on... Seals with heels...? How a.. read more
This Write takes me into a stream of never ending beautiful literary voyage. But to grasp the meaning it may take a life time to me, may be that is what your sarcastic oblivion means here..brilliant craft with beautiful rhyming and the word play within the verses is even more awesome. I am speechlessly lost in the beauty of the craft. In the end it is big big smile on my face.
Thank you Silente, for bring and sharing this word splendour...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

You are quite smart for linking the title with the silliness contained therein, hah... As long as yo.. read more
Bala Gorthi

7 Years Ago

You are welcome. Keep penning more.
It's almost impossible to catch the pace, which you usually use while creating a poem... and it's require a sensible mind to understand the aura of that one... Again a magical write 😃😃

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Abhishek... This was a truly silly go-at-it, glad you enjoyed
making statements on the state of the world...the reptiles in charge with cold cold insides and thick skins that can't be penetrated, even by the needs of the people...
too many Cains....not only is this strong in content, the delivery just slips off the tongue like a crafty, nimble, quick lizard finding its way around obstacles...
excellent piece of writing.
j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

You always amaze me at how you get better meanings from my stuff than I do sometimes... Hah, an exce.. read more
even though i didn't get the real intent of this poem, still i consider this as a profound one. thank you...
for sharing this wonderful poem to us and
for sharing a part of your soul to the world...

Respectfully,
L.C.
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

The intent is up to the reader... Whoever said we have to comply with stringent rules of writing law.. read more
witty metaphoric eloquence. An engaging and clever rhyming scheme, Nice work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

I appreciate that very much, thank you, B...
Still coming to terms with the way you enlarge your theories about life! Thi-i-i-nk this might be something to do with slaughtering animals.. or there again, might be how the roses grow overnight?! Sometimes I wonder if you're playing games not only with words/phrases but your readers. You've said you write 'free-mindedly' then- press a button and whizzz it off! So ok, hands up, didn't really understand!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

7 Years Ago

strike looms..placards ready
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Lawyer up, smile-on... Rofl
emmajoy

7 Years Ago

He'll call you, on the golf course, of course..

gone..
This is the first piece of yours i've read and I enjoyed it. You have a very unique style, I look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing, Silente.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Traci... I appreciate that, and look forward to reading some of yours as well
This is just wow...fast - paced and with a great flow..even though I didn't understand a single thing...I loved it...
"A pill and refill the drill that will build flammable hills
With will of steel...". This line sure was cool..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Ah, you seemed to catch it was originally written to have that all as one line... Tis' one of my fav.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Just find some feelings, and attempt to put word-sounds to them Sofia, and you can write this way as.. read more
Sofia

7 Years Ago

It was a pleasure reading this...yeah, I thought of it as one line and it sounded so good with the f.. read more

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apennylate

Denver, CO



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