The words, the ambiance, the rhythm... I liked everything.
It seemed to me (at least in my mind as I read it) that the tone changed right before reading "Flames and rain", as if day turned into night and a strange deep and calm voice whispered the rest of the poem in my ears.
I loved it!
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
You would be pretty correct in that tone change, Tom, and thank you so much for appreciating and tim.. read moreYou would be pretty correct in that tone change, Tom, and thank you so much for appreciating and time taken to visit... It means the world
It was definitely worth it so you're most certainly welcome. I'm looking forward to read more of you.. read moreIt was definitely worth it so you're most certainly welcome. I'm looking forward to read more of your writing in the future.
7 Years Ago
Aye, ditto, friend... Thanks you again, a pleasure
6 Years Ago
Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail betw.. read moreGee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?
Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.
And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)
If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.
Regards,
-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...
(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)
Many strong statements in the poetry. You left many topic for the reader to ponder. Thank yu my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail betw.. read moreGee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?
Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.
And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)
If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.
Regards,
-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...
(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)
The words, the ambiance, the rhythm... I liked everything.
It seemed to me (at least in my mind as I read it) that the tone changed right before reading "Flames and rain", as if day turned into night and a strange deep and calm voice whispered the rest of the poem in my ears.
I loved it!
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
You would be pretty correct in that tone change, Tom, and thank you so much for appreciating and tim.. read moreYou would be pretty correct in that tone change, Tom, and thank you so much for appreciating and time taken to visit... It means the world
It was definitely worth it so you're most certainly welcome. I'm looking forward to read more of you.. read moreIt was definitely worth it so you're most certainly welcome. I'm looking forward to read more of your writing in the future.
7 Years Ago
Aye, ditto, friend... Thanks you again, a pleasure
6 Years Ago
Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail betw.. read moreGee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?
Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.
And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)
If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.
Regards,
-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...
(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)
wonderfully unique. this was sooo nice written. i loved the flow. you are soo smart !!! loved the word choice and the rhymes which ended up making this a masterpiece
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Pie... I am not sure about "smart", as I am not sure it takes a very complicated mind to .. read moreThank you, Pie... I am not sure about "smart", as I am not sure it takes a very complicated mind to think of seals with heels... But thank you
Lol, I loved this. It flows so well and has a fun (and sarcastic) tone that made me smile at the rhymes. Here I am returning the review favor 4 months later and I found a gem! Great work. :) Thanks for sharing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Hah, no problem in time taken to review... Not a biggie whatsoever... Just glad you enjoyed yourself.. read moreHah, no problem in time taken to review... Not a biggie whatsoever... Just glad you enjoyed yourself so much, aha... Thank you
What up my man! It's great to get back and read your work. You're like a chameleon bro. There's always your style mixed in with different flavors. Intelligent writing constantly evolving. Always a pleasure.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
DUFF!!! You live...!
7 Years Ago
Haha, what up dude! Ya, I've been moving. I'll be up in Denver in about a week. In New Mexico at t.. read moreHaha, what up dude! Ya, I've been moving. I'll be up in Denver in about a week. In New Mexico at the moment.
7 Years Ago
YES....! That is amazing to hear... I thought you had been eaten by alien invaders... A peace of min.. read moreYES....! That is amazing to hear... I thought you had been eaten by alien invaders... A peace of mind, truly, to know you are still intact, hah... Keep moving, bro, we gotta smoke soon...! Safe journeyz
7 Years Ago
Oh we are definitely meeting up bro! As soon as I get there I'll hit you up
7 Years Ago
Ahh yeah... Can not wait.... Seriously, though... Do not die on the way here... WE gota lots of bada.. read moreAhh yeah... Can not wait.... Seriously, though... Do not die on the way here... WE gota lots of badass poetry to write
7 Years Ago
I'm down with that. I haven't written anything in awhile.
7 Years Ago
Oh, well we are... Going to write till our fingers fall off, and we can not stand the look of anothe.. read moreOh, well we are... Going to write till our fingers fall off, and we can not stand the look of another word...! ONLY THEN... Will our destinies be complete...
7 Years Ago
Lmao! Sounds like a plan. I need some inspiration.
7 Years Ago
We shall venture on great expeditions of inspiration... Stealing and plundering across all the land
7 Years Ago
You make me laugh bro. It's gonna be cool when we're chilling
7 Years Ago
You are damn right, It will be like if bees had knees...
7 Years Ago
Hahaha! True statement. I can't wait man. I've missed Colorado and some major green
This is several notches of brilliance above my ability to comprehend, but even at my low level, I'm blown away by your seemingly carefree careless effortless skipping rope down the sarcastic trail of life. I'm a rhyme-aholic myself, often love to do the same sound over many times, but you've taken this to a whole other pinnacle! The most exquisite thing is the way you repeat on a sound & then turn a corner to a different meaning, then riffing on rhyme awhile again, then turning another corner, etc. I actually found myself admiring your word play more than actually absorbing your message. This makes a writer want to play with words.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Your praise makes me feel several notches higher on the totem pole of ego... Rhyming is something th.. read moreYour praise makes me feel several notches higher on the totem pole of ego... Rhyming is something that can not really be switched off in meh brain... Insanely abstract or not, it just happens to be the way that it is, fully... NOTHING else, and I mean nothing else makes me happier... Than knowing I made someone want to experiment with words... Your review and twisty insight leaves me inspired to inspire... Thank you very much... Always a pleasure
I hear this one being narrated over a thundering bass line with an old style squeaky Hammond organ wailing in counterpoint! Another vivid acid dream, my friend! Love it. My favourite part is the last few lines:
"Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Abel
Disabled enabled to go down in fables heard round the stables...
Tables round and able to saddle cables
Ladles making halos...
A noble payload.'.
The lead guitar cuts in over the bass for this part and screams its way into oblivion!
Wonderful stuff!
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
How I missed this review... I will never know... As your insight is MORE than a highlight of enterta.. read moreHow I missed this review... I will never know... As your insight is MORE than a highlight of entertainment for my day... Haha... I loved that line as well... Now I hear it with guitar, and I am sold... Acid dreams and rot...
7 Years Ago
Keep the good stuff coming, Silente. I'm loving it!