Sarcastic Oblivion

Sarcastic oblivion is a caustic reptilian

Is a cause for a million trillion billion villains to shed their skin chillingly...

Willingly still

A fed lamb on ah-grill...

Still as dams filled

A still of damnable swill...

A pill and refill the drill that will build flammable hills

With will of steel...

Tamable fields steal gullible frame from the heels of seals

Healed like veal in halls of fame...

Flames and rain

Eels in pain...

Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Abel

Disabled enabled to go down in fables heard round the stables...

Tables round and able to saddle cables

Ladles making halos...

A noble payload

Reviews

[Tom Aubin]

The words, the ambiance, the rhythm... I liked everything.
It seemed to me (at least in my mind as I read it) that the tone changed right before reading "Flames and rain", as if day turned into night and a strange deep and calm voice whispered the rest of the poem in my ears.
I loved it!

[apennylate]

You would be pretty correct in that tone change, Tom, and thank you so much for appreciating and time taken to visit... It means the world

[Tom Aubin]

It was definitely worth it so you're most certainly welcome. I'm looking forward to read more of your writing in the future.

[apennylate]

Aye, ditto, friend... Thanks you again, a pleasure

[RolandDee]

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.

[Coyote Poetry]

Many strong statements in the poetry. You left many topic for the reader to ponder. Thank yu my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.


Coyote

[RolandDee]

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.

[Maria]

Loved the rhyme and rhythm as well. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece

[apennylate]

You are most welcome, Maria, thank you for the appreciation

[pia]

wonderfully unique. this was sooo nice written. i loved the flow. you are soo smart !!! loved the word choice and the rhymes which ended up making this a masterpiece

[apennylate]

Thank you, Pie... I am not sure about "smart", as I am not sure it takes a very complicated mind to think of seals with heels... But thank you

[Stan Lee]

Lol, I loved this. It flows so well and has a fun (and sarcastic) tone that made me smile at the rhymes. Here I am returning the review favor 4 months later and I found a gem! Great work. :) Thanks for sharing.

[apennylate]

Hah, no problem in time taken to review... Not a biggie whatsoever... Just glad you enjoyed yourself so much, aha... Thank you

[duff]

What up my man! It's great to get back and read your work. You're like a chameleon bro. There's always your style mixed in with different flavors. Intelligent writing constantly evolving. Always a pleasure.

[apennylate]

DUFF!!! You live...!

[duff]

Haha, what up dude! Ya, I've been moving. I'll be up in Denver in about a week. In New Mexico at the moment.

[apennylate]

YES....! That is amazing to hear... I thought you had been eaten by alien invaders... A peace of mind, truly, to know you are still intact, hah... Keep moving, bro, we gotta smoke soon...! Safe journeyz

[duff]

Oh we are definitely meeting up bro! As soon as I get there I'll hit you up

[apennylate]

Ahh yeah... Can not wait.... Seriously, though... Do not die on the way here... WE gota lots of badass poetry to write

[duff]

I'm down with that. I haven't written anything in awhile.

[apennylate]

Oh, well we are... Going to write till our fingers fall off, and we can not stand the look of another word...! ONLY THEN... Will our destinies be complete...

[duff]

Lmao! Sounds like a plan. I need some inspiration.

[apennylate]

We shall venture on great expeditions of inspiration... Stealing and plundering across all the land

[duff]

You make me laugh bro. It's gonna be cool when we're chilling

[apennylate]

You are damn right, It will be like if bees had knees...

[duff]

Hahaha! True statement. I can't wait man. I've missed Colorado and some major green

[apennylate]

Rofl, Colorado has missed YOU, bro, lolol

[duff]

I'm not even 6 hours away and I can smell it already, lol

[apennylate]

Bro, I have a bowl waiting

[barleygirl]

This is several notches of brilliance above my ability to comprehend, but even at my low level, I'm blown away by your seemingly carefree careless effortless skipping rope down the sarcastic trail of life. I'm a rhyme-aholic myself, often love to do the same sound over many times, but you've taken this to a whole other pinnacle! The most exquisite thing is the way you repeat on a sound & then turn a corner to a different meaning, then riffing on rhyme awhile again, then turning another corner, etc. I actually found myself admiring your word play more than actually absorbing your message. This makes a writer want to play with words.

[apennylate]

Your praise makes me feel several notches higher on the totem pole of ego... Rhyming is something that can not really be switched off in meh brain... Insanely abstract or not, it just happens to be the way that it is, fully... NOTHING else, and I mean nothing else makes me happier... Than knowing I made someone want to experiment with words... Your review and twisty insight leaves me inspired to inspire... Thank you very much... Always a pleasure

[The Iron Horseman]

I hear this one being narrated over a thundering bass line with an old style squeaky Hammond organ wailing in counterpoint! Another vivid acid dream, my friend! Love it. My favourite part is the last few lines:
"Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Abel
Disabled enabled to go down in fables heard round the stables...
Tables round and able to saddle cables
Ladles making halos...
A noble payload.'.
The lead guitar cuts in over the bass for this part and screams its way into oblivion!
Wonderful stuff!

[apennylate]

How I missed this review... I will never know... As your insight is MORE than a highlight of entertainment for my day... Haha... I loved that line as well... Now I hear it with guitar, and I am sold... Acid dreams and rot...

[The Iron Horseman]

Keep the good stuff coming, Silente. I'm loving it!