Questionably Questioned...

Questionably questioned by the quest-givers

I'm a chest-earner

and I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight...

I'm a dark dragon seeking a stark mistress on a dime...

No warlock circle to burn on my skin

I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips...

I'm a laughingstock as the tablet flips tables of woe

Blows and throes...

I'm not Thor, no hammer and cord...

A zoid, I am moist...

Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe...

Imagine the blight that will rise when they copy my hidden light

this time I'm "ite"...

Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...

Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime...

Slide your fines in the one-way ticket receiver and bide your brine so the wet can align with the vetting of your soul...

Whole toll is folded...

A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket

I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss...

Wish I had no lisp but after today I wish the rips and wasp dips would leave me tossing and turning...

Needing grit...?

 Oh, you wish...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
"Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..."
The above lines were my favorite. The words hones and direct. My kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[apennylate]

Thanks very much, Poetry... The bee-line really IS my favorite, heh... My kind of review...

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Abhishek Asthana]

sometimes your creations are just like the power boosters to the world of poetry... what a dynamic write with the soothing topic... most importantly the way it ended is awesome... very nicely done :)

[apennylate]

A power booster...? Well damn, that is kickass... Perhaps a battery for inspiration, haha... Very nice insight, Abhishek... I appreciate and thank you...

[Paul Bell]

Dig the razor sharp lines in this.
Creation of wit and ferocity.
We need more.

[apennylate]

Well.... I have TONS more, haha... If I get published the world can have at it... Dug the insight, Paul... Thanks

[aj milton]

As ever very creative! It's not just the flow, it's the meaningful pauses. My mind is not sure if it's listening to world class rap, or on a trip. That's way to simplistic, but the essence of how I reacted on first scan.

[apennylate]

World class rap, or a massive trip... Love this, haha... Nah, not simple, perfect... Thanks very much, AJ...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

woah....a thought provoking write....and there are so many questions that i was literally asking them to myself....wonderful..

[apennylate]

What a nice thing to hear... Questions are the life force of the driving force of life...

[apennylate]

Oh, and thank you...!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

always a pleasure.....

[Krutika]

I am not sure what to say.. Coz this piece is literally a Symphony of questions.. The words are juxtaposed in a way that they form a ladder, the make unknown, but just about right to climb up..all the way! Insane lines! 👍

[apennylate]

I am not sure what to say, either. Krutika... You leave me speechless from praise... Thanks so much, keep climbing...! If the ladder is climbable...

[Joey Nizz]

I love your selection of words, so creative with a great imaginary image.

Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed reading it :)

[apennylate]

I really enjoy reading your insight, Joey... Thanks a ton

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome :)

[Sofia]

Gosh. It's absolutely amazing... I'm speechless reading this...I really wish that you publish all ur poems as a book of poems... you've got a wonderful talent...keep writing :)

[apennylate]

I would very much enjoy being published, Sofia... Your review has left me speechless, and thanks so much for dropping in... I will!

[Sofia]

Most welcome ☺

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

"Questionably questioned by the quest-givers

I'm a chest-earner

and I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight...

I'm a dark dragon seeking a stark mistress on a dime...

No warlock circle to burn on my skin

I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips...

I'm a laughingstock as the tablet flips tables of woe

Blows and throes...

I'm not Thor, no hammer and cord..."


This man is a monster at this.... take a look at the title, it is a crusher now introduction is just splendid.... All in all the poem itself is a monster

[apennylate]

You make me feel monsterish, haha, thanks very much, like always...

[Farhan Shaikh]

A wonderful start of the day by reading this poem☺

[apennylate]

A wonderful start to my day, and these reviews, Farhan... Thanks very much