Questionably Questioned...

Questionably questioned by the quest-givers

I'm a chest-earner

and I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight...

I'm a dark dragon seeking a stark mistress on a dime...

No warlock circle to burn on my skin

I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips...

I'm a laughingstock as the tablet flips tables of woe

Blows and throes...

I'm not Thor, no hammer and cord...

A zoid, I am moist...

Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe...

Imagine the blight that will rise when they copy my hidden light

this time I'm "ite"...

Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...

Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime...

Slide your fines in the one-way ticket receiver and bide your brine so the wet can align with the vetting of your soul...

Whole toll is folded...

A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket

I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss...

Wish I had no lisp but after today I wish the rips and wasp dips would leave me tossing and turning...

Needing grit...?

 Oh, you wish...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
"Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..."
The above lines were my favorite. The words hones and direct. My kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[apennylate]

Thanks very much, Poetry... The bee-line really IS my favorite, heh... My kind of review...

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Kesha]

Wow man this was sick! Your rhymes were flowing perfectly together, sweet! I loved this line in particular however:

"I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight"

[apennylate]

That is a favorite of mine, as well... As it shows traces of the darker side of my somewhat fluffed up poetry, heh...

[Kesha]

Yes it certainly does! It's awesome!

[angel]

I love this I will write this over and over. You are a great writer and thank you for reading mine and your comment

[apennylate]

Thank you very much, Angel...! My pleasure, and I appreciate the drop-in

[angel]

You are welcome my pleasure and I love to read poems. Well written

[Nipplegrinder]

"bitter like winter on the back of grime"
That s**t's brilliant.
Your stuff always begs a second read.
I'm a fan, Sil.

[apennylate]

Ah, well thank you again, Grinder... Winter is usually only concerned with being clean, heh, so it makes sense it is not a fan of grime...

[Nipplegrinder]

I find this unquestionably well constructed. The last four lines are a well-timed, beautiful ribbon , on the middle of the piece. It flows, and starkly shows your command of language and its nuance. Another impressive effort.

[apennylate]

Thanks very much, Grinder... This is an impressive review, and I appreciate it...

[Rimpi Saikia]

Those words just took me to another dimension!

[apennylate]

Your review took me to another dimension of appreciation... Thank you so much, Rimpi..!

[Elizabeth]

Amazing poem, you're words take me to a completely different place.This poem captures the imagination and leaves us with much questions. Really great

[apennylate]

Thank you, Mist, your words captured my heart with joy...

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

You took me on an adventure with you but with your words! A very creative poem. I love it!

Love,
Vasilees

[apennylate]

Your review took me on an adventure of praise, Vasilees, thanks so much...

[wordman]

this is certainly a creative write

[apennylate]

An even more creative review from the Man of Words, himself... Well maybe not... But still... Thanks very much, always appreciate it...! Hah

[MysteriousAries]

sound like you've been to an adventure or ready no matter what... A very interesting poem....

[apennylate]

Thanks very much, Aries, I def' have...