Questionably Questioned...

Questionably questioned by the quest-givers

I'm a chest-earner

and I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight...

I'm a dark dragon seeking a stark mistress on a dime...

No warlock circle to burn on my skin

I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips...

I'm a laughingstock as the tablet flips tables of woe

Blows and throes...

I'm not Thor, no hammer and cord...

A zoid, I am moist...

Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe...

Imagine the blight that will rise when they copy my hidden light

this time I'm "ite"...

Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...

Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime...

Slide your fines in the one-way ticket receiver and bide your brine so the wet can align with the vetting of your soul...

Whole toll is folded...

A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket

I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss...

Wish I had no lisp but after today I wish the rips and wasp dips would leave me tossing and turning...

Needing grit...?

 Oh, you wish...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
"Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..."
The above lines were my favorite. The words hones and direct. My kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[apennylate]

Thanks very much, Poetry... The bee-line really IS my favorite, heh... My kind of review...

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Ana B.]

Wow! This is amazing, mind blowing stuff!!!
''A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket'' is sublime. I am becoming a fan :D

[apennylate]

To make the girl with the best musical tastes on the site a fan... Well... I could not be happier! Thanks, Ana

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

This was a treat, really nice work!

[apennylate]

A treat of a review, thank you...!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Incredible! Encore!
It seemed as if you were communicating directly with me. This is somewhat different from your usual style.
Everything has been said.
Riveting and spellbinding!

[apennylate]

Thank you, Tazeen, it always humbles me to know people can find a common voice within my writing... Riveting insight, thanks again

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

"Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe"- I rejoice at your mad talent my friend. Word-Master, Beat-Master, Rhyme-Master unchallenged. "I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss"...Rocket Man 4-Ever! Kudos!

[apennylate]

Hah, a rocket-man, eh... Thanks very much for the powerful ride of words, again, Annette... It is very appreciated....

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are the best S. Are you ok? Your profile comment talks about pain? Take good care.

[apennylate]

I will be okey, thank you... Even sponges have over-saturation limits.

[Decidious wind]

Wow! Very expressive. I love how you imagined the romance as part of a game. To be honest, nowadays, romances are so deceptive they are like games and i guess that that is what you wanted to show.

[apennylate]

Brilliant, Wind, brilliant... Romance IS much like a game, to some, and to those few... Not much true joy can be had... Thanks so much for the review.

[Maria]

Wow, intense and powerful at the same time.

[apennylate]

An intense and powerful review, Maria, thank you very much

[Maria]

You are welcomed my friend. I love reading your writings indeed.

[Jon Roggie]

You just write. They won't let me get away with a honest statement.

[Jon Roggie]

I was referring to the site. The better the write, the shorter the review.

[apennylate]

Haha, what a wonderfully dry, yet powerful piece of insight... Sometimes short can amount to longer than long... Thank you

[The Iron Horseman]

You've still got it, my friend. In this one my favourite line is 'A paper heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket.'
Mind you, the dark dragon bit is pretty cool, too.

[apennylate]

Hah, who does not love dragons... Thanks very much, Horseman... That line stands out to me as well...

[Prashant Bajpai]

I very much agree with the review of Coyote.. this one is really too good

[apennylate]

Thank you, Prashant, means a lot to hear...

[Shasha]

Ooh! You are getting another fan! I simply love your writings!

[apennylate]

Thanks very much, Shasha, I do so love fans... Hah

[Shasha]

Ha!
You're welcome!!!