Free-Falling Alone...

I sputter when I spit and spatter, taste of matter, waste of grave rattle

Brave hatter, mad gravity grafter, laughter disaster, gray pitter-patter 

The rains of brains after the lame-after-ache, same pass-and-take, please often make rainbows exist in travels, burned tomes are learned, unravel more paste and batter

Rags-n-Aberrations 

After the master gabber, I'm a faster blaster, a mix of traveler 'n' masker

Basket of basking travesty, carnival blur carved in mirth...

An alabaster bur

A word unheard... A song unlearned

Like bong of worth stirred and perched

I'm slurped and burped...

Stripped of dirt, the earth is burnt in crispy birth

I'm earnest in turning over every stone

unfurling my throne

no one is owed...

I'm free-falling on my own 

Reviews

[Island Hippy]

Aloha silente, old skool for days! Nui (much) kudos for your swerve and flow.
Loved this....

"An alabaster bur
A word unheard... A song unlearned
Like bong of worth stirred and perched
I'm slurped and burped...
Stripped of dirt, the earth is burnt in crispy birth"

Izzy

[apennylate]

Hii, Hippy of the Islands...! Thanks for the drop-in, appreciate it much, especially the old-school appreciation and swaggish insight...

[Surya]

Words do sing, and I heard a beautiful song here..I loved it...:)

[apennylate]

That they do, S... I hope to only bring those vibrations to life... Loved the review... Thanks a ton...

[Surya]

My pleasure...!!

[Jes' Pi]

Lovely....................

[apennylate]

An even more so lovely review, thank you, JP...

[Jes' Pi]

you're welcome

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"I'm earnest in turning over every stone
unfurling my throne
no one is owed...
I'm free-falling on my own"

I think I am too ;)
Seriously, this was cool stuff! The song like hip hop quality you give to your pieces is admirable :)
"A word unheard... A song unlearned"
That's a good line too!
Btw.. I think free falling alone is kinda good rather than free falling with someone else only to find that it's only you doing that while the other one just floated back...
I enjoyed reading this :)

[apennylate]

Careful... Might need a parachute... I love hearing that... Hip hop song quality to basic poetry... I loved that line... Aye, best to have people around you that bolster oneself towards a goal, not cause air-drag... I enjoyed your review, thank you...!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah even parachutes can be mal functioning lol 😛
You're welcome! A pleasure always reading your works 😊

[apennylate]

Hope one has glue-able feathers in his/her pockets in that case... Haha...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol that's a cool idea 😛😛

[CMC]

The rhymes, the scheme, and the feel of the entire thing are out of my league. Here's my interpretation: unraveling at the words we speak, it's like a fast blaster that shoots past. Not enough time to see where it's going until it hits its mark, we may learn lost songs and facts, but we are free-falling until we find that truth when it hits.

[apennylate]

Nothing is out of your league, Chris, I just combine sounds and stuff... Not very difficult when you think of it that way... This is an amazing interpretation, and I am quite honestly impressed...! You have inspired me to weave that meaning into my mind...

[CMC]

Thank you, and I was glad to give my two cents. I am also happy that you were inspired by my view of your work.

[SSKaitlyn]

The rhyme and rhythm of this is incredible. I love the flow and word choice. Honestly one of my favorites now, so thank you.
Excellent job.

[apennylate]

Your words are even more incredible...! Honestly one of my favorite reviews now, so thank you...

[Jay-LH]

This is really good.. well done

[apennylate]

Thanks, Jay

[Farhan Shaikh]

A very nice read, enjoyed your work

[apennylate]

A very nice review, thank you, FS...

[duff]

I swear man it's like listening to old school hip hop. It just puts a smile on my face! This whole piece is ridiculous.

"Like bong of worth stirred and perched
I'm slurped and burped...
Stripped of dirt, the earth is burnt in crispy birth"

Those lines right there did it for me. Smooth operating as usual:)

[apennylate]

That is exactly what I want to hear...! Smiles and 90's hip hop... Even smoother review style... Glad you enjoyed... Thanks, Master Duff

[duff]

Anytime my man! Now i gotta find something to listen to, lol

[apennylate]

Diz is my "Good" youtube list, it has a smattering of stuff, most of the recent 700+ is beats/instrumentals hip-hop... My other elektro list used to be pretty popular, have not maintained it for a minute... But you are welcome to cruise that stuff...

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLPWqmQINBCaPhiuus1pbLPrHbOYv8m49N

[apennylate]

Plus I update everything daily, and lots of saved playlists on my channel... Enjoy...!

[duff]

Right on man. I'll play it for sure. I'm always down for new music.