Free-Falling Alone...

I sputter when I spit and spatter, taste of matter, waste of grave rattle

Brave hatter, mad gravity grafter, laughter disaster, gray pitter-patter 

The rains of brains after the lame-after-ache, same pass-and-take, please often make rainbows exist in travels, burned tomes are learned, unravel more paste and batter

Rags-n-Aberrations 

After the master gabber, I'm a faster blaster, a mix of traveler 'n' masker

Basket of basking travesty, carnival blur carved in mirth...

An alabaster bur

A word unheard... A song unlearned

Like bong of worth stirred and perched

I'm slurped and burped...

Stripped of dirt, the earth is burnt in crispy birth

I'm earnest in turning over every stone

unfurling my throne

no one is owed...

I'm free-falling on my own 

Reviews

[Island Hippy]

Aloha silente, old skool for days! Nui (much) kudos for your swerve and flow.
Loved this....

"An alabaster bur
A word unheard... A song unlearned
Like bong of worth stirred and perched
I'm slurped and burped...
Stripped of dirt, the earth is burnt in crispy birth"

Izzy

[apennylate]

Hii, Hippy of the Islands...! Thanks for the drop-in, appreciate it much, especially the old-school appreciation and swaggish insight...

[Krutika]

Haha.. Reading your writing is like embarking on an adventure. You start somewhere and end unexpectedly somewhere else. But one thing I must admit it's one hell of a ride.

Amazing as always 👍

[apennylate]

Krutika, thank you so much... I always think of things as grand adventures... Where I end up... I never know, heh... But it is ALWAYS a friggin' ride...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

This is........wow and wow and wow😊

[apennylate]

Your words are wow, wow, and wow-er... Thanks, WN, for the praise...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahah...my pleasure!!

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

yoh...your brain works like a machine man...everything you emit is beyond explanation

[apennylate]

Heh, it def' has an explanation, man... Not all that complicated or "machine-like"... Anyone can learn to do it rather simply...! Just flow landscape... Thank you for the amazing appreciation...

[Hope]

Its always interesting to read your works, Silente....
Your works are really unique and surprising....
Great work....:)

[apennylate]

Thank you so much for the work of reading and reviewing... I appreciate it...!

[Hope]

My pleasure...

[wordman]

it sounded like a song to me

[apennylate]

Thank you, Wordman, that is pretty much the highest praise my writing can receive, in my mind... So... Thanks a ton...!

[The Iron Horseman]

You certainly make utter nonsense fun! Your splatter of words, for whatever unknown reason, raises a smile and conjures weird images. You may be some new form of mind-altering substance!

[apennylate]

That is a friggin' amazing compliment... Most assuredly one of my favorites received on this site... Haha, thanks so much, Iron... One can only hope...

[The Iron Horseman]

You are very welcome! :)

[Alex Ware]

Big fan of this. It's so much fun to read your work, it's so playful and free flowing. Like the comments have said below, there's an element of hip hop to this too.

[apennylate]

I am a big fan of your review, thanks so much, Alex... Always 90's hip hop...!

[Shasha]

This looks like a great song and a flawless poem! It's really nice! It's amazing dude! I want more!

[apennylate]

Thank you, Shasha... I will do my best to provide more...!

[Shasha]

Yes!
You're welcome!

[Richard McLin]

Not just a great poem, has one of the best final stanzas ever. Great piece. My favorite of your work that I've read so far.

-Richard

[apennylate]

Richard... Your praise is always so kindly taken... Thanks much, glad to know that last stanza is appreciated... Was not sure on it at the time...