This is a totally rad piece of writing, Silente and I applaud you once more. I love the fact that you have a way in putting down words that will go well with whatever you are wanting to talk or write about. I also have seen your collabs with Duff and the others, and those are superb as well. I have much to learn, and will continue to do so. Great writing my friend. Keep it up
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Why thank you, Maria, for the continued support and appreciation shown... Means the world to hear, a.. read moreWhy thank you, Maria, for the continued support and appreciation shown... Means the world to hear, and aye... That is all I really CAN do...Pick out words that I feel tie into the emotions of the moment... Those writers are amazing, and I would encourage you to check out everyones writing... Mind-blowing stuff...! We all have much to learn, the grave is the end of the lesson, until then... Do your best and always show-up, haha... Thanks again, and keep writing as well...!
Thanks I am reading alot of stuff on here, and trying to learn the basics of Haiku and Micro Poetry .. read moreThanks I am reading alot of stuff on here, and trying to learn the basics of Haiku and Micro Poetry as well...Never heard of that until just now...but sure will. Thank you for your encouraging words
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Of course, I do not even now the fancy terms, myself, so do not feel bad... Hah
This is a totally rad piece of writing, Silente and I applaud you once more. I love the fact that you have a way in putting down words that will go well with whatever you are wanting to talk or write about. I also have seen your collabs with Duff and the others, and those are superb as well. I have much to learn, and will continue to do so. Great writing my friend. Keep it up
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Why thank you, Maria, for the continued support and appreciation shown... Means the world to hear, a.. read moreWhy thank you, Maria, for the continued support and appreciation shown... Means the world to hear, and aye... That is all I really CAN do...Pick out words that I feel tie into the emotions of the moment... Those writers are amazing, and I would encourage you to check out everyones writing... Mind-blowing stuff...! We all have much to learn, the grave is the end of the lesson, until then... Do your best and always show-up, haha... Thanks again, and keep writing as well...!
Thanks I am reading alot of stuff on here, and trying to learn the basics of Haiku and Micro Poetry .. read moreThanks I am reading alot of stuff on here, and trying to learn the basics of Haiku and Micro Poetry as well...Never heard of that until just now...but sure will. Thank you for your encouraging words
7 Years Ago
Of course, I do not even now the fancy terms, myself, so do not feel bad... Hah
oh my god.a round of applause to the mighty SILENTE!!
I enjoyed your poem sir. a lot
clap!clap!clap! i can't help myself sorry...
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7 Years Ago
Well, thank you, Jarrette... I do not know about "mighty"... But I appreciate it, nonetheless... No .. read moreWell, thank you, Jarrette... I do not know about "mighty"... But I appreciate it, nonetheless... No need to apologize, haha...
while this may be viewed as rap or written word even, it is a throw back to the beginning of off course, out of the box writings that began with the beatnik of the late 50s and early 60s.
well done.
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7 Years Ago
Hell yeah, you are absolutely right, and I thank for reading and commenting... Especially such an in.. read moreHell yeah, you are absolutely right, and I thank for reading and commenting... Especially such an intelligent and engaging review...
I just looked up the show... Haha, quite the throwback...
7 Years Ago
jeans ... sneakers ... sweat shirts ... alt life
life recycles itself often.
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I know right, his character sounds like the modern day slacker... Hah, I may need to watch this show.. read moreI know right, his character sounds like the modern day slacker... Hah, I may need to watch this show...
what a stunning piece of writing... as i always state you have got a unique pace in terms of writing which is unmatchable...presentation is awesome... great work as usual !! :)
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An equally stunning appreciation, thanks so much, AA... I would say that it IS match-able, though, b.. read moreAn equally stunning appreciation, thanks so much, AA... I would say that it IS match-able, though, because your own writing matches it...!
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well, frankly speaking thats not true... we need to develop that versatility and fearless at.. read more
well, frankly speaking thats not true... we need to develop that versatility and fearless attitude to have a slight resemblance with yours...perhaps i would reach that level someday... :)
Ah, well... I see you have no patience for fluff... Haha... It is true that it takes time and skill .. read moreAh, well... I see you have no patience for fluff... Haha... It is true that it takes time and skill to hone a solid flow landscape... Yet I stand by the fact that your writing is very much on its way... Perhaps, if you do not like the term "match", I may be allowed to say your writing echoes my own... Fearless versatility is in all of us... Just have to reach for it... That someday is most likely very near, my friend... I would be glad to help in anyway I can...! Always around if you wanna bounce ideas about... Keep writing, and stay positive...!
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well, that's so sweet of you,, thanks for the wishes... and i noticed quite a few times that you cal.. read morewell, that's so sweet of you,, thanks for the wishes... and i noticed quite a few times that you call me A.A... is my name is so lengthy ??,, hahaha... can i address you by S.S....means ( Silente Sir) in this way i can pay you respect in further discussion.. haha
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I just enjoy addressing people with nicknames... Haha... Not so lengthy at all... Call me whatever w.. read moreI just enjoy addressing people with nicknames... Haha... Not so lengthy at all... Call me whatever works for you... Lol... I like that, though... S.S...
truth be told Silente, we cannot justify poetry with any bureaucracy . Rap made poetry ethical, then drug it from the perpetual transmigrations and ethical consequences that determine the nature of a persons next existence. That's why reading pre renaissance poetry is so non-vigorous/ and boring as s**t. I am so glad you came here. Glad you are here to show us the beginnings of
the "new" literal expressions. Great work ....dana
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7 Years Ago
Dana, your words always make me feel a bit less-than-articulate with the way I speak... For you nail.. read moreDana, your words always make me feel a bit less-than-articulate with the way I speak... For you nail down the rhythm of classy talk... A straight up joy to read your insight, and you unequivocally give some of the best compliments on this site... I'v been compared to brilliant poets by you, now you are saying I am an entrepreneur of new literal expression... Just wow... I did not know it was possible to blush this much... Thanks so much.... Silente'
Wild thoughts led reader on a crazy ride. I liked the drive and energy of the poetry. A fast pace poem with a internal battle. We must win. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
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7 Years Ago
Thanks for taking the time to read and enjoy so much...
The alcohol psychotic feeling I have with this one. You're really the man when ti comes to lines like these. Love it. Totally. :)
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7 Years Ago
Hah, being "the man" at something... Is quite something...! Thanks, Cap... Love the reviews. Totally.. read moreHah, being "the man" at something... Is quite something...! Thanks, Cap... Love the reviews. Totally... :3 Careful with the substances, they bite back...
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Hey! I never drink alcohol.. haha just comapring the feeling I guess. ;p
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Hey! Me either... Well, not anymore, I should amend... How could you compare a feeling to something .. read moreHey! Me either... Well, not anymore, I should amend... How could you compare a feeling to something you never do...? Hehe