Separation Anxiety...

Separation Anxiety...

A Poem by apennylate
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Appeasing demons...

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Separation anxiety makes me uneasy, shapes me easily, queasy, I feast evilly upon the greasy lips of past travesty

Fast fallacy and i'm done, shes always falling over herself to cry for mercy and i'm stunned

Why should I give her thirsty guns to use against me
 I'm first...
 The one who shared mirth dreamily

Steaming and wheezing I refuse to give up wearily, barely surviving her Aires, I aim to breathe air when sky-diving 

Laughing and crying, i'm scared when repeating scalded lines back in tragedy

Consumed by the majesty of mages tact
I'm track-less, a puppet in repair
Fact-less, like I know only rare crafts

I give up... 

This tale is a wrap-dance, and i'm done making soul-aching payments
Ailments of whole-wrecking statements

Laments of shocking gray pavement, and I hung silently till the sun is gone
No more bereavements, believe you, me

I'm sincere when I appease demons with rum   

© 2017 apennylate


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This is a totally rad piece of writing, Silente and I applaud you once more. I love the fact that you have a way in putting down words that will go well with whatever you are wanting to talk or write about. I also have seen your collabs with Duff and the others, and those are superb as well. I have much to learn, and will continue to do so. Great writing my friend. Keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maria

7 Years Ago

Thanks I am reading alot of stuff on here, and trying to learn the basics of Haiku and Micro Poetry .. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Of course, I do not even now the fancy terms, myself, so do not feel bad... Hah
Maria

7 Years Ago

Lol. Thanks you made my day



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This is a totally rad piece of writing, Silente and I applaud you once more. I love the fact that you have a way in putting down words that will go well with whatever you are wanting to talk or write about. I also have seen your collabs with Duff and the others, and those are superb as well. I have much to learn, and will continue to do so. Great writing my friend. Keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maria

7 Years Ago

Thanks I am reading alot of stuff on here, and trying to learn the basics of Haiku and Micro Poetry .. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Of course, I do not even now the fancy terms, myself, so do not feel bad... Hah
Maria

7 Years Ago

Lol. Thanks you made my day
Well written, really clever rhymes. Your words have a great flow and conveys a lot of emotion. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Katerina Grev... A well-written review...
oh my god.a round of applause to the mighty SILENTE!!
I enjoyed your poem sir. a lot
clap!clap!clap! i can't help myself sorry...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Well, thank you, Jarrette... I do not know about "mighty"... But I appreciate it, nonetheless... No .. read more
while this may be viewed as rap or written word even, it is a throw back to the beginning of off course, out of the box writings that began with the beatnik of the late 50s and early 60s.

well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

I just looked up the show... Haha, quite the throwback...
keith

7 Years Ago

jeans ... sneakers ... sweat shirts ... alt life
life recycles itself often.
apennylate

7 Years Ago

I know right, his character sounds like the modern day slacker... Hah, I may need to watch this show.. read more
what a stunning piece of writing... as i always state you have got a unique pace in terms of writing which is unmatchable...presentation is awesome... great work as usual !! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Ah, well... I see you have no patience for fluff... Haha... It is true that it takes time and skill .. read more
Abhishek Asthana

7 Years Ago

well, that's so sweet of you,, thanks for the wishes... and i noticed quite a few times that you cal.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

I just enjoy addressing people with nicknames... Haha... Not so lengthy at all... Call me whatever w.. read more
truth be told Silente, we cannot justify poetry with any bureaucracy . Rap made poetry ethical, then drug it from the perpetual transmigrations and ethical consequences that determine the nature of a persons next existence. That's why reading pre renaissance poetry is so non-vigorous/ and boring as s**t. I am so glad you came here. Glad you are here to show us the beginnings of
the "new" literal expressions. Great work ....dana

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Dana, your words always make me feel a bit less-than-articulate with the way I speak... For you nail.. read more
this is awesome! I really feel every single word in it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

That is the point of flow landscape... Thanks so much, XOX!
.... and it's a wrap/rap...badoom-tss!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Hah, what a sap to find the flat phat rap a stacked wrapped lance... Thanks again, SnowyFlames...
Wild thoughts led reader on a crazy ride. I liked the drive and energy of the poetry. A fast pace poem with a internal battle. We must win. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to read and enjoy so much...
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
The alcohol psychotic feeling I have with this one. You're really the man when ti comes to lines like these. Love it. Totally. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

I study. ;)
apennylate

7 Years Ago

LOL... Clever... Most clever...
CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

I try to be... :)

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