Alabaster Salamanders

Alabaster Salamanders

A Poem by apennylate
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Rash and unabashed...

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Salamander masters with alabaster blasters flap wings of disaster amidst
amassed raps and rapture
Lap the lap of lapsed taps and capture the art of lost math
Arrhythmic slashed
 I get it...
 I'm crass grass gashing all who pass
Rash and unabashed
Flash of molestation
Illustrations of automatic atomization
Sodomization of aberration 
Realization that poems written for nations slip through like brass lesions 
Crack cracked up like pixie dust
Glitter lust
Hidden dance 
All dried up 

© 2017 apennylate


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Hi Silente, You have such an interesting way of writing. Such an incredible way with imagery. Now, I am going to admit, I do not understand some of your poetry, but I love the rhythm of your poems. You write very much like my oldest son. He too, is much smarter than I, lol, or we just have different forms of writing. He is not on this site, but I think he would like your writing as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Haha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def.. read more
MaryKC

7 Years Ago

Nope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me .. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Who am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity w.. read more



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Woah, woah, slow down there Silente!
Ya going way too fast and I know there's no audio included in the awesome, unique poem of yours, but you let the readers imagine and enjoy the flow and pace!
Well done Silente! :)
Loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Wow, Mr. Writer, you are too kind... There is always audio to my writing, I just keep the source ins.. read more
Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

Lol :D No problem!
Ha ha! This was rediculously entertaining! The rhyme scheme was raving like a ghetto blaster!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thanks, AP, I appreciate it! Ghettttooo blllassstterrr...!
Digging it for sure my friend. I like the title and the last three lines have this emotional subtlety that cap the whole thing off. Nice work man.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Long time no talk, my friend Duff, your words are much appreciated... Thanks so much...
duff

7 Years Ago

You're very welcome. Slick stuff as usual my man
God, I am addicted to your flow. It's so awesome.
Great poem here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

God... Your addiction to my flow is quite appreciated, thanks much... I love horror, and am planning.. read more
Sinbulvinter

7 Years Ago

Yeah, you got some real skills in your flow, yo.
And feel free to check it out. The whole fi.. read more
This is very different to the poems I usually read, but brilliant nonetheless. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Lykos, different is splendid in my book, glad you agree!
Lykos

7 Years Ago

No problem. I love finding new ways to write poems. Definitely will try my hand at one at some stage.. read more
It's like beck lyrics, pretty enjoyable :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

I had to look up what "Beck lyrics" are... I must say... They ARE rather enjoyable... Thanks, Alex.... read more
I like the visualization in this, especially embellishing crack as pixie dust and glitter.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kittenincake

7 Years Ago

That's why they stay so skinny.
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Heavy-set pixies are known for skinny dipping as well, however it is much less repeated in poetic li.. read more
Kittenincake

7 Years Ago

Is it still skinny dipping if the pixies are heavy-set?
Well this ones a bit hard to review lol. Fantastic, bombastic, in your face, all over the place, and highly original. Loved it, and feel like it's a style I can get behind.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Hah, hard, but you bombarded it with powerful words... Thanks, Richard, and I am fond of the style a.. read more

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Added on April 25, 2017
Last Updated on April 25, 2017
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