Hi Silente, You have such an interesting way of writing. Such an incredible way with imagery. Now, I am going to admit, I do not understand some of your poetry, but I love the rhythm of your poems. You write very much like my oldest son. He too, is much smarter than I, lol, or we just have different forms of writing. He is not on this site, but I think he would like your writing as well.
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7 Years Ago
Hii, Mary, that is wonderful to hear about your son, will have to share a piece of his with me at so.. read moreHii, Mary, that is wonderful to hear about your son, will have to share a piece of his with me at some point... I will share a secret, I do not understand some of my poetry... So I think it is safe to say we are all intelligent creatures... Thanks so much for the thoughtful review...
7 Years Ago
You have a good sense of humor! Ok, sounds good to me, we are all smart!
Haha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def.. read moreHaha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def' jump on the "all are smart" boat... Except dum-dums, they are not so smart...
7 Years Ago
Nope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me .. read moreNope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me know all the time. Except I think I'm hilarious.
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Who am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity w.. read moreWho am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity within ourselves... At least that's all that counts...
Amazing use of words. You made the reader fall into your strong statements. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to honest ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
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7 Years Ago
Much thanks, CP, your strong insight, and flow with honest wording make for an excellent review...
7 Years Ago
Was my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome.
Sometimes the words are felt more than read, in my case...whatever shades remain hidden after that linger in my mind to absorb and dwell on :) Awesome piece and I like the way you write...uniquely you and your own voice, awesome flow and thrilling...
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What a thoughtful line or two... Thank you, Ruth, always a pleasure to hear from you...
Hi Silente, You have such an interesting way of writing. Such an incredible way with imagery. Now, I am going to admit, I do not understand some of your poetry, but I love the rhythm of your poems. You write very much like my oldest son. He too, is much smarter than I, lol, or we just have different forms of writing. He is not on this site, but I think he would like your writing as well.
Posted 7 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Hii, Mary, that is wonderful to hear about your son, will have to share a piece of his with me at so.. read moreHii, Mary, that is wonderful to hear about your son, will have to share a piece of his with me at some point... I will share a secret, I do not understand some of my poetry... So I think it is safe to say we are all intelligent creatures... Thanks so much for the thoughtful review...
7 Years Ago
You have a good sense of humor! Ok, sounds good to me, we are all smart!
Haha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def.. read moreHaha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def' jump on the "all are smart" boat... Except dum-dums, they are not so smart...
7 Years Ago
Nope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me .. read moreNope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me know all the time. Except I think I'm hilarious.
7 Years Ago
Who am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity w.. read moreWho am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity within ourselves... At least that's all that counts...
I really liked this, could almost hear somebody rapping this in the background, wonderfully written,, my favorite line was:
Realization that poems written for nations slip through like brass lesions
That one really stuck with me, nicely done!
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7 Years Ago
That line was a puzzler for me, went through a few iterations, so glad its final destination amused .. read moreThat line was a puzzler for me, went through a few iterations, so glad its final destination amused you... Thanks, Kesha...
I dried up too after reading this lol jk :p
This was cool, Silente. The art of lost math made me laugh haha
Superb flow. And I love your use of rhyming here. This def had a beat going in my head ;P
In your words, maddeningly penned haha :P ;P
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7 Years Ago
Thanks, Yum... Cool to hear it inspired the opposite of fear... I appreciate your emulation of my re.. read moreThanks, Yum... Cool to hear it inspired the opposite of fear... I appreciate your emulation of my review style, as well... Brilliantly reviewed... Haha
7 Years Ago
Hmm here I am wondering, why would one be fearful of this writing.. :p
You're welcome. Oh and.. read moreHmm here I am wondering, why would one be fearful of this writing.. :p
You're welcome. Oh and I've been wondering about your pen name too which is kinda interesting ;P ;)
7 Years Ago
Opposite of fear would imply... Courage...? So I guess I missed my mark in implying that laughter is.. read moreOpposite of fear would imply... Courage...? So I guess I missed my mark in implying that laughter is the opposite of fear... My pen name is a name I came up with during a... Less than happy time in my life... It just means to imply that the "e" after "Silente" is... Silent... Hopefully that sates your curiosity... Heh
7 Years Ago
Ahh well I'll bear that in mind from now on 😉
And that's pretty cool on your part and dum.. read moreAhh well I'll bear that in mind from now on 😉
And that's pretty cool on your part and dumb on my part lol since I've been saying it phonetically wrong all this time as 'Silent - ay' haha so I'll keep it in mind too 😛😛
It does sates my curiosity a little 😉😛
7 Years Ago
Lmao, you are funny... Only a little, eh? Remember nothing is wrong! You can pronounce my made-up na.. read moreLmao, you are funny... Only a little, eh? Remember nothing is wrong! You can pronounce my made-up name however you wish... Haha...
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Hahah yeah only a little 'cause now I'm wondering what happened to make you choose that particular p.. read moreHahah yeah only a little 'cause now I'm wondering what happened to make you choose that particular pen name lol my curiosity knows no bounds 😛😂 but don't answer I'll just let it go lol
And yeah I still pronounce it that way. It got stuck that way 😛
Oh I know I am funny thank you haha you are too 😉😂
7 Years Ago
I was not planning on revealing my despair on a public forum, lolz... Feel free to call me w/e you w.. read moreI was not planning on revealing my despair on a public forum, lolz... Feel free to call me w/e you would like... Am almost positive I will never know... Knowledge that one is funny, is the first step in dealing with the "funny" in a responsible way! Haha...
7 Years Ago
I know that haha that's why I didn't really ask, one can ponder haha
Ahem.. Meaning I.. read moreI know that haha that's why I didn't really ask, one can ponder haha
Ahem.. Meaning I'm irresponsible? Hmm 😎😎 lol jk 😛
7 Years Ago
Pondering is half the fun... I was actually making a terrible reference to the twelve step program, .. read morePondering is half the fun... I was actually making a terrible reference to the twelve step program, but instead of "addict"... I used "funny"... I know... It was a pretty awful joke... At least I amused myself somewhat...
You do know that your jokes and most of your poems fly over this little head of mine haha still yeah.. read moreYou do know that your jokes and most of your poems fly over this little head of mine haha still yeah amuse yourself lol 😛😉😂
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Not from lack of intellect on your part, mostly from my all ready being rather obscure, and the cult.. read moreNot from lack of intellect on your part, mostly from my all ready being rather obscure, and the cultural differences... That helps confuse as well, haha... Remember... Amusing yourself is all that matters, YK... Lolz
7 Years Ago
Cultural differences.. Yeah could be lol
Haha yeah true that 😛😉
You show a good sense of rhythm. I like the way the "flap wings" in the first sentence (a spondee?) slows you down almost to a stop a does the word disaster.
Lots of alliteration play here too. Very interesting writing on your part and fun to read.
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7 Years Ago
Had to look up what a "spondee" was, haha... Thanks, Relic...
Aloha silente, super flow again, the first three lines make a punchy political statement and you close with some equally punchy lines. Articulate phrasing. Very nice. Izzy
ee cummings wrote like this 80 years ago and they thought he was nuts..You,like cummings was working with shapes and word sounds.....And he, like you, made us comfortable with the inconspicuous. Wonderful......dana
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7 Years Ago
Holy... To be compared to him... You captured how I wrote, though, and that is using shapes and word.. read moreHoly... To be compared to him... You captured how I wrote, though, and that is using shapes and word sounds... Brilliant deduction, I hope the inconspicuous can be made wonderful... Thanks ever so much...