Alabaster Salamanders

Alabaster Salamanders

A Poem by apennylate
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Rash and unabashed...

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Salamander masters with alabaster blasters flap wings of disaster amidst
amassed raps and rapture
Lap the lap of lapsed taps and capture the art of lost math
Arrhythmic slashed
 I get it...
 I'm crass grass gashing all who pass
Rash and unabashed
Flash of molestation
Illustrations of automatic atomization
Sodomization of aberration 
Realization that poems written for nations slip through like brass lesions 
Crack cracked up like pixie dust
Glitter lust
Hidden dance 
All dried up 

© 2017 apennylate


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Hi Silente, You have such an interesting way of writing. Such an incredible way with imagery. Now, I am going to admit, I do not understand some of your poetry, but I love the rhythm of your poems. You write very much like my oldest son. He too, is much smarter than I, lol, or we just have different forms of writing. He is not on this site, but I think he would like your writing as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Haha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def.. read more
MaryKC

7 Years Ago

Nope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me .. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Who am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity w.. read more



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Amazing use of words. You made the reader fall into your strong statements. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to honest ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Much thanks, CP, your strong insight, and flow with honest wording make for an excellent review...
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Was my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome.
Sometimes the words are felt more than read, in my case...whatever shades remain hidden after that linger in my mind to absorb and dwell on :) Awesome piece and I like the way you write...uniquely you and your own voice, awesome flow and thrilling...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

What a thoughtful line or two... Thank you, Ruth, always a pleasure to hear from you...
I love the rhyme and rhythm to your words - so very creative. You are unique and such a pleasure to read! Julie

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

I love your unique and pleasure to read reviews... Thank you...
Hi Silente, You have such an interesting way of writing. Such an incredible way with imagery. Now, I am going to admit, I do not understand some of your poetry, but I love the rhythm of your poems. You write very much like my oldest son. He too, is much smarter than I, lol, or we just have different forms of writing. He is not on this site, but I think he would like your writing as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Haha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def.. read more
MaryKC

7 Years Ago

Nope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me .. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Who am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity w.. read more
I really liked this, could almost hear somebody rapping this in the background, wonderfully written,, my favorite line was:

Realization that poems written for nations slip through like brass lesions

That one really stuck with me, nicely done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

That line was a puzzler for me, went through a few iterations, so glad its final destination amused .. read more
Kesha

7 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
I dried up too after reading this lol jk :p
This was cool, Silente. The art of lost math made me laugh haha
Superb flow. And I love your use of rhyming here. This def had a beat going in my head ;P
In your words, maddeningly penned haha :P ;P

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You do know that your jokes and most of your poems fly over this little head of mine haha still yeah.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Not from lack of intellect on your part, mostly from my all ready being rather obscure, and the cult.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Cultural differences.. Yeah could be lol
Haha yeah true that 😛😉
That's a pretty cool rhythmic flow you made with your words.
I've enjoyed reading this, well wrote.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Nizz
Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Your welcome, Keem em coming!
apennylate

7 Years Ago

I will for sure!
You show a good sense of rhythm. I like the way the "flap wings" in the first sentence (a spondee?) slows you down almost to a stop a does the word disaster.

Lots of alliteration play here too. Very interesting writing on your part and fun to read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Had to look up what a "spondee" was, haha... Thanks, Relic...
Aloha silente, super flow again, the first three lines make a punchy political statement and you close with some equally punchy lines. Articulate phrasing. Very nice. Izzy

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Aloha, IH, Thanks again for the super review...
Island Hippy

7 Years Ago

Your welcome
ee cummings wrote like this 80 years ago and they thought he was nuts..You,like cummings was working with shapes and word sounds.....And he, like you, made us comfortable with the inconspicuous. Wonderful......dana

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Holy... To be compared to him... You captured how I wrote, though, and that is using shapes and word.. read more

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Added on April 25, 2017
Last Updated on April 25, 2017
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Denver, CO



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