Hi Silente, You have such an interesting way of writing. Such an incredible way with imagery. Now, I am going to admit, I do not understand some of your poetry, but I love the rhythm of your poems. You write very much like my oldest son. He too, is much smarter than I, lol, or we just have different forms of writing. He is not on this site, but I think he would like your writing as well.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Hii, Mary, that is wonderful to hear about your son, will have to share a piece of his with me at so.. read moreHii, Mary, that is wonderful to hear about your son, will have to share a piece of his with me at some point... I will share a secret, I do not understand some of my poetry... So I think it is safe to say we are all intelligent creatures... Thanks so much for the thoughtful review...
7 Years Ago
You have a good sense of humor! Ok, sounds good to me, we are all smart!
Haha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def.. read moreHaha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def' jump on the "all are smart" boat... Except dum-dums, they are not so smart...
7 Years Ago
Nope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me .. read moreNope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me know all the time. Except I think I'm hilarious.
7 Years Ago
Who am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity w.. read moreWho am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity within ourselves... At least that's all that counts...
You have an excellent way with rhythm, and your vocabulary is incredibly powerful. I love the line rash and unabashed, because it makes me think of someone persisting despite what others say or think.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Wow, Chris, thanks so much for the wonderful review... It was incredibly powerful as well... I adore.. read moreWow, Chris, thanks so much for the wonderful review... It was incredibly powerful as well... I adore that line, for much of the same thinking as you...
How could you made a powerful imagery with great tone? You are such a wonder.
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7 Years Ago
Flow landscape, dearest Cap, all about the sounds and shapes of syllable rhymes... Thanks for the wo.. read moreFlow landscape, dearest Cap, all about the sounds and shapes of syllable rhymes... Thanks for the wonderful review...
Love the musical movement here< Tis as if you're winding emotional thought around your readers, wanting, needing them in your world .. or, maybe showing it so they leave you happily alone to stone in it !
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7 Years Ago
Hah, either way... As long as peace can be found, alone or mobbed by the lyrically hungry... Thanks .. read moreHah, either way... As long as peace can be found, alone or mobbed by the lyrically hungry... Thanks so much, EJ... The words of a talented writer such as yourself go far in my book...
This felt like a tongue twister, fun to read. I didn't understand much though. That's totally my fault. I like simpler things. But intricate isn't bad at all. You will appeal to more intellectual crowds I'm sure.
Never discount oneself out of understanding abstract meaning... Tongue twister it is indeed, and mor.. read moreNever discount oneself out of understanding abstract meaning... Tongue twister it is indeed, and more thought is put into sound and letter shape, than "being smarter than the average"... Simple, intricate... W/e works for you! (I do not understand some of the stuff I write)... So I think I am leaning more towards the "simple" crowd, myself... Haha, thanks for the lovely review...
7 Years Ago
Thank You! However, there's nothing simple about how you write. I gain some IQ points by reading you.. read moreThank You! However, there's nothing simple about how you write. I gain some IQ points by reading your stuff :D
7 Years Ago
You humble me... I gain happiness points for appreciation of my work, so we shall consider ourselves.. read moreYou humble me... I gain happiness points for appreciation of my work, so we shall consider ourselves even...
This is absolutely fantastic! Followed kittenincake to this. Why, oh why, isn't there a love button on writerscafe?
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7 Years Ago
I do love the love of my light, Kittenincakez... She is a fantastic writer as well! You can certainl.. read moreI do love the love of my light, Kittenincakez... She is a fantastic writer as well! You can certainly adore my writing in your heart, that counts! Thanks for the review...