Alabaster Salamanders

Alabaster Salamanders

A Poem by apennylate
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Rash and unabashed...

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Salamander masters with alabaster blasters flap wings of disaster amidst
amassed raps and rapture
Lap the lap of lapsed taps and capture the art of lost math
Arrhythmic slashed
 I get it...
 I'm crass grass gashing all who pass
Rash and unabashed
Flash of molestation
Illustrations of automatic atomization
Sodomization of aberration 
Realization that poems written for nations slip through like brass lesions 
Crack cracked up like pixie dust
Glitter lust
Hidden dance 
All dried up 

© 2017 apennylate


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Hi Silente, You have such an interesting way of writing. Such an incredible way with imagery. Now, I am going to admit, I do not understand some of your poetry, but I love the rhythm of your poems. You write very much like my oldest son. He too, is much smarter than I, lol, or we just have different forms of writing. He is not on this site, but I think he would like your writing as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Haha, well thank you again, I am not sure how to handle the cascade of praise... But I will most def.. read more
MaryKC

7 Years Ago

Nope, those suckers are pretty stupid! And yes, I know I'm not funny because both of my sons let me .. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Who am I to argue, since you all ready know... Haha, except I think we all find a certain hilarity w.. read more



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CMC
You have an excellent way with rhythm, and your vocabulary is incredibly powerful. I love the line rash and unabashed, because it makes me think of someone persisting despite what others say or think.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Wow, Chris, thanks so much for the wonderful review... It was incredibly powerful as well... I adore.. read more
"Flash of molestation"..

How could you made a powerful imagery with great tone? You are such a wonder.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Flow landscape, dearest Cap, all about the sounds and shapes of syllable rhymes... Thanks for the wo.. read more
I love the way you use words...
Its just amazing!
You write out of the box.:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you, dear Naat, your review is out of the box of boxes...!
Hope

7 Years Ago

My pleasure......:)
Love the musical movement here< Tis as if you're winding emotional thought around your readers, wanting, needing them in your world .. or, maybe showing it so they leave you happily alone to stone in it !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Hah, either way... As long as peace can be found, alone or mobbed by the lyrically hungry... Thanks .. read more
i just wanna say one word..''keep it up''!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

I just wanna say one word... Thanks so much...!
Wajiha Nayeem

7 Years Ago

hahaha...!!!
I loved the game of words displayed here :) A true ''work out'' for the brain, and as a bonus, a healthy humor. Marvelous work dear author :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Ana...
you have a way with words my friend

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Means much coming from the Wordman himself. Thanks...
This felt like a tongue twister, fun to read. I didn't understand much though. That's totally my fault. I like simpler things. But intricate isn't bad at all. You will appeal to more intellectual crowds I'm sure.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Never discount oneself out of understanding abstract meaning... Tongue twister it is indeed, and mor.. read more
Jessica Lima

7 Years Ago

Thank You! However, there's nothing simple about how you write. I gain some IQ points by reading you.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

You humble me... I gain happiness points for appreciation of my work, so we shall consider ourselves.. read more
This is absolutely fantastic! Followed kittenincake to this. Why, oh why, isn't there a love button on writerscafe?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

I do love the love of my light, Kittenincakez... She is a fantastic writer as well! You can certainl.. read more

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Added on April 25, 2017
Last Updated on April 25, 2017
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