Hipology Psychology

What's in a name...

I got an enemy ahead ah-me 'n' evil entity centipede identity amphetamine

Instead ah-me takin' dreadful hits of realities sodomy oughta be lobotomized dead full of similes

Romanticized partiality i'm of a desensitized particularity 

Particularly an obituary laced with pseudonyms hidden grace

Trace of hipology psychology shadows my synonyms when choosing a face 

Reviews

[KWP]

yes, I like this, I can visualise someone up on stage thrusting each word out into the universe for people to make of them what they will. I can see people sitting and listening and unconsciously moving their heads to the beat of the words and every so often nodding, mouth open in aggreeance ... nice one my friend X

[apennylate]

Hah, my mouth was slightly open in complete amazement at this review, thank you so very much for the brilliant words, my friend...

[Abhishek Asthana]

A very meaningful write... this time quite different from your other electrifying pieces... really enjoyed it, and i made my friends read your poem to show the magical wordplay it contains... they praised your art a lot... awesome work sir :)

[apennylate]

Thank you very, very much, Abhishek... This WAS a different write from others... Has MUCH more meaning... You made your poor friends read my work, hahaha... Well, I am glad they enjoyed it, forced or not, lol... It is words like this, that help motivate me...! Thanks again...

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was pretty cool. I am still chewing on the words... the thoughts. just everything in my head. I like it. it makes me think.
xo FLB

[apennylate]

Thank you, FlatLine, always good to think upon the chewing...

[FlatLineBeauty]

haha, it is ;D

[Kittenincake]

"I got an enemy ahead ah-me 'n' evil entity centipede identity amphetamine
Instead ah-me takin' dreadful hits of realities sodomy oughta be lobotomized dead full of similes" - love the grittiness in these two lines. It creates a smooth flow with word association on top of rhyming. I appreciate the words leading up to "ah-me," I think it's imperative to use similar words to emphasize the sound you're going for.

[apennylate]

Thanks so much, I agree...

[MaryKC]

This is my favorite of the ones of yours I have read so far. I am with the others that have said it has a hip hop feel. I can definitely feel that as well. When KWP said that she could see people every so often nodding their heads, I actually had that vision in my head. I hate to sound like I am just copying someone else but that is what this poem did to me as well. This is excellent!

[apennylate]

That is good! To have something spark the same thing in two people... Means I am doing something right, Thank you, and it is one of mine as well...

[Ruth]

Your wording is awe inspiring, the depths of free form flow are luring and I could read this several times and see a new meaning each time...epic...

[apennylate]

Thanks much, PRS, it means the world to me from such a wonderful writer such as yourself...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there are two sides to every story, there are two sides to every poet---the writer side and the one who observes but isn't even aware that he or she writes---that muse trance that happens...
we might think we are crazy...but we are just writers.

j.

[apennylate]

You really seemed to grasp what was said here, JEC... Wonderfully, in fact... What mask the muse dons is not ours to control... Thank you very much...

[Island Hippy]

Aloha silente, this was incredible to read and demonstrates your hip hop style so well. I really love 90's hip hop to me this has a Mos Def meets Rakim flow and attitude about it. I really like the following line a lot...

"Romanticized partiality i'm of a desensitized particularity"

Kolohe (rascal) good read. Izzy

[apennylate]

You have brilliantly deduced my theme of style... 90's hip hop allll the way, my friend... You have probably given me my favorite review/compliment EVER by comparing me to them, haha... Thanks, thanks, and thanks... I loved my 3 P's as well... I will admit, this was a twist on Jeff Turner/ Big Puns styles... Lots of inspiration from them...

[Island Hippy]

You're welcome

[Tomás Ó C..]

Tongue tripping word trip here!

[apennylate]

Thanks, T, I am fond of tongue slipperiness, haha...

[andrew mitchell]

brilliant word play, complex and and i wonder if drug induced word play is like this, nice work silente

[apennylate]

Hey, Andrew, having dealt with the burden of substance addiction in its many forms, and having struggled to pursue my dreams because of it... I can assure you... This is a 100 percent clean and sober style, we may THINK drugs "enhance"... They in fact, detract from our original creativity, imo... Thanks so much for the review, your kinds words mean much...