Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

A Poem by apennylate
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Insanity Pleads...

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My chemistry betrays me as insanity pleads before lean-jaded depravity
seen scorn as a decrepit unraveling
of baffling mean-spirited entities gathering deceitfully
for more pandering of reality in a gallery slinging misery entirely...

My sympathy behaves erratically
seethes forlorn as heated apathy forms rapidly
soft-churning rhapsody squirms passionately...

Inevitably heart-warming tragedy occurs.

Fiendishly hard-earned philosophy
turns of metaphor laced individuality...

Blurred and slurred rhymes.

Aggressive lines wormed into the tapestry of sadism
this organisms mechanism of limelight fading posturism
burning eyes turning bright from realism
shading light from mine minds rind empty escapism
slime heavy kinda heady with the infectious algorithm...

 Swirls bleeding lecherous breathing escaping the rhythm of morbid reality
 curiosity yearns for instability
With the itty-bitty fallacy of a gallant killing spree
 gallons of rippling prayers stripped of buoyancy
 floating dead in the sea flamboyantly... 

© 2017 apennylate


Author's Note

apennylate
Same poem (mostly)... But now edited... Yay...!

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the velocity of your perspicacity of the duplicity of words specificity makes the bunny's brain nuerocity spark enthusiastically! LOL.... my god I have met my match!!!! You love words and they love you I know cause they just told me my dictionary just salivated all over my desk and started to groan in an unsightly manner causing me to have to clean up some unmentionable goo... be sure to put the dictionary farther away from the word porn next time. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

3 Months Ago

Imagery and Language:

Intense and Vivid Imagery:

The poem employs stro.. read more
apennylate

3 Months Ago

Interpretation
Inner Conflict and Societal Critique:

Personal Struggle:
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apennylate

3 Months Ago

I call it the glass wall...
My old self is just beyond it, I can see it, I can feel it, but i.. read more



Reviews

Wow........I just........wow. Words can't even begin to describe how amazing this poem is. It pulls you in and doesn't let go.

Posted 7 Years Ago


apennylate

7 Years Ago

Wow, thanks so much, Raven...
Raven Moonchild

7 Years Ago

I must ask,what mental zone do you get yourself into to write such genius?
apennylate

7 Years Ago

I put on a beat or instrumental... Not much else to it, heh... I do not know if it is genius... Just.. read more
A wonderful piece, I loved the rhyme and flow of this one here... the words just jump out right at you ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Your words jump out at me, thanks for the fun review, Kesha...
Kesha

7 Years Ago

Haha you are very welcome!
This so strong man ! , when i read this poem i felt like so famous writer wrote it , it's powerful, i love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Belief is a powerful tool... That it is...
Nora

7 Years Ago

Yeah 😊 keep believing and you will be 💕
apennylate

7 Years Ago

You are just an overall nice person, eh, Nour_han... Haha... I shall endeavor to keep believing...
Your opening line is strong and initroduces a theme that flows through the poem. I enjoyed reading this I can relate. Your writing is unique and strong. Thank you for sharing.

Sheer Terror

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

I enjoyed reading this review, as it was strong and unique... Thanks. ST
TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

You are welcome. Silente
Oh my god, this is beautiful, I always like the way you write, always different words, a vast vocabulary, unlike me. You are an amazing writer, believe me or not, up to you, But you are flawless. Keep writing!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Oh meh gosh... Thanks Sasha... I like the way you review, hah... Vast vocabularies are a pittance co.. read more
Shasha

7 Years Ago

Aw, you're welcome and thank you.
But not better then you. Maybe one day I will compete with.. read more
Read three times, to self, slowly and stuttering finger beneath each word kind, then.. aloud as if the words were mine. Found more from the first.. why? By reading to self, the initial silence grows and grows and words juggle and nudge each other into near catastrophe.. or perhaps more politely.. mayhem. Each phrase is competing with another, with previous and somewhat what's unknown but surely coming. Not entirely sure about the repeated rhyming but it's not unpleasant and shows amazing language. I believe, sanity is supposed to be framed reality., whereas insanity has lost what it never really had but, isn't aware of the fact. Perhaps? Great and intriguing write, might need to return - when my head's clear!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Lol, long may I reign... If only... I need to setup a new site, pronto...! The trolling on here is o.. read more
emmajoy

7 Years Ago

How sad that a once first class site has become such a hell-hole. Writing has given way to bullying.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

I agree, EJ... I have finally completed the first form of our new community-driven website! With liv.. read more
Well your poems are a legacy:)
You stand out in the crowd of poets!
A WOW work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

WOW... You have gone above and beyond in terms of lofty compliments paid... Your review stands out i.. read more
Hope

7 Years Ago

Happy to hear:)
this is wonderful to read...great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

An equally wonderful review to read... Thanks...!
Wajiha Nayeem

7 Years Ago

the pleasure is all mine!
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Well... It is a teensy bit mine, as well... :3
This is an intriguin poem. I like how the language is complicated and the rhyme consistent. Sometimes simplicity is beautiful but i often get bored if everything is simple. Keep up the artistic work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Thanks. DW... I agree... Simplicity is wonderful, however intricacy is my preferred flavor...
A feast for the vocabulary... You describe:

explicity, the dichotomy and multiplicity of reality ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

apennylate

7 Years Ago

Ohhhh... I very much like that one... Also, this review is top notch, hah... A feast, indeed... Than.. read more

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apennylate
apennylate

Denver, CO



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