That's my problem, Dye. I figure everything out. I still have a bad case of quick draw McGraw. I never give my mind an opening to think and evaluate for itself. Most women hate me because I'm not silly and ignorant, as in I'm not a dummy. If women have a problem, problem solved. If women don't have a problem, theirs a problem, as always. My reviews might seem like mindless idiot content, but, I'm an individual who is a live and be myself type. A lot of women feel queer, which is why they see me as a whatever, unless they are fucked over, and they really need an a*s covering. I'm into women, as they are not me!
It's always so refreshing to spend time with someone who begins to know and understand your body in such.a unique way, which makes everything else in the world disappear for awhile. They know what you like, don't like and also up for experiencing new things with you. Being so physically, as well as mentally, in tune with another is such a beautiful thing and you're right, it is just like reading a new book. Starting a new journey to somewhere unknown. Reading this also reminded me of the song "Write On Me" by Fifth Harmony. Beautiful imagery and storytelling!
this still has me smiling at it's simplicity, lyrical letters and story telling theme that had me wishing I too was to was to be read a bed time tale..loved it, faultless..curtsy bow
Lol I think I'm going to read these to my husband ....... haha jk then he'll never stop touching me !
I love your Erotic writing .....
You are good my grandma would have loved you she loved smutt books lol that's what she called them.
By the end of the night
I will share in your bed
You 'never' disappoint
You keep me well-read
----- The emotions get stirred up with the taste of love -------
Lovely, an outstanding poem indeed. It`s much appreciated by me ... I`ve read your many stuffs in a day and all stuffs are well penned .... i`m pleased to be on your pages. Even today, I`m feeling good to read a lovely writer`s stuffs who writes very erotically but in a very sensible way. I`ve read your much stuffs with much attention... and in last, what all I find through your pieces`s ..
-----The aromas of love which get spread with the price of lust-----
Keep writing and wish you much luck for your up-coming new immortal stuffs!
A little cliche...here...
but the write gives enough in lines and keeps my interest...
the process and development adds value in the whole thick of things...
I appreciate the honestly Glen. I am happy to know that it was sill able to keep your interest. :)
10 Years Ago
Everything keeps my interest...I've know your style since day one...keep writing and crafting your w.. read moreEverything keeps my interest...I've know your style since day one...keep writing and crafting your work...vividness is all around you...if you get a chance --- take a look at my finished book...previews are all over the web...God bless...
10 Years Ago
I will take a peek for sure Glen. My time is cut short this evening but I will look as soon as a mo.. read moreI will take a peek for sure Glen. My time is cut short this evening but I will look as soon as a moment opens for me. I am so happy for you- I wish you a ton of success!
haha, I really like this. It has a nice rhythm, well relaying a story and setting a scene. And naturally, you're playing to the (naughty or erudite).
One small hiccup I came across.
"A life out of focus
Where reality is a blur"
I found I stumbled a bit here. Maybe...
"A life out of focus
The scene is a blur'
Both for rhythmic and thematic reasons.
Just a thought.
Good stuff. Not the usual "erotica".
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much Alessander. I definitely struggled with that part too, I kept wanting to write "r.. read moreThank you so much Alessander. I definitely struggled with that part too, I kept wanting to write "realities" but that didn't make sense either. I appreciate the suggestion and will work on changing it. The feedback is appreciated.
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