Wedding Night--Tale of Intimacy

Dedication piece about love, romance, passion and intimacy

You took me by surprise

Coming from behind

Arms around my waist

A devilish grin

You pulled me in

I love your warm embrace

A gentle kiss

I feel the stubble

Just below your lips

Hugging me

Pulling me

Tugging at my hips

A little lick

You take a nip

Breathing on my neck

Weakening knees

Hard to think

Fully we connect

A simple touch

Can say so much

You're always in my head

Smiling

A whisper

Follow me to bed

I take your hand

Fall in line

A kiss along the way

A playful glance

We start to dance

Nothing more to say

Pheromones

Hormones

Intoxicating scents

Heart-strings

Wedding rings

Never feeling tense

Very plush

A kiss to hush

Sheets beneath my flesh

Entangled arms

You start to charm

You take away my breath

A little moan

A simple groan

Your name is just a stutter

Strongly grasp

A look that last

Bodies start to shudder

Intimately

Passionately

Holding onto you

Special day

A perfect night

All because "I do"

Author's Note

This is really more of a dedication piece to my hubby. The picture is from our wedding day, during a boudoir photo shoot the morning of.

Four Years Married
Seven Years Together
Soul Mates Forever
Happy Always

I hope when he sees this I get lucky ;) Ha Ha -- Hey--I'm still me!

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Awww...this is so sweetly romantic. Surely the best sex is with someone with whom you're passionately in love. And it's funny you should mention boudoir photo shoots...I've been looking at a bunch of those on Pinterest!

I hope your husband likes the poem, and I hope you get lucky too! ;-)

[Dye]

Thank you again. Pinterest is addicting! LOL I also keep a lot of boudoir stuff on my boards too.

[Eric Pudalov]

I don't suppose I could follow you on there?! Is your profile private? ;-) I've found a couple of people that I follow for awesome sexy photos. Sex and art *can* be intertwined, in my humble opinion.

[The Slayer]

I love this. It makes me feel that everyone can find that special someone.

[Dye]

Thanks so much for taking the time to read it. I believe that everyone can, it took me about 32 years to find it, but now that I have it, I'm not letting go. :)

[Eric Pudalov]

Aww...that's lovely. I'm so happy that you found your special someone too, even if it took you awhile. What did he think of this? ;-)

[Dye]

He liked it Eric, but he is my biggest fan so I knew he would. :)

[Eric Pudalov]

I figured as much!! I've written a few about my wife on here too (some of the erotic ones, and also one called "Olive You."). It sounds like you're busy, but if you have a chance to read them, I'd love to hear your feedback. I respect your opinion because you're so good at this genre, I think!!!

[David Scott]

I think he will be getting lucky as well...
This is the kind of passion you need to keep alive in your marriage!
Great poem and a great gift to give your husband. Bravo!

[Dye]

Wow-- you really made your way around LOL. My hubby did like this one ;) Thanks again for taking a read.

[Traci]

Lovely snapshot to accommodate a beautifully written poem of love.

"Special day - perfect night - all because "I do"

The perfect epitome of what love is supposed to be.

Wishing you many more years of happiness. Well done, my friend.

[Dye]

Thank you Traci. I strongly agree...I wish this kind of love for everyone :)

[Frieda P]

What a gorgeous snapshot to have of that breathtaking moment. Your poetry are the brush strokes of that intimate moment, lovely Dye....simply sublime.

[Dye]

Thank you so much Frieda. It was a fun day for sure.

[Angi]

That photo is so hot! I loved this piece because that is what it is supposed to be like. My guy and I will be celebrating our 20th anniversary next month. I was 19 when I met him and he still holds the key to me. Lovely, lovely, lovely. Angi~

[Dye]

Happy early anniversary to you two, that's amazing and to still feel that way is great. Thanks for the comment on the pic.... hard to have an intimate moment when 5 of my male co-workers were filming me in my undies. LOL

[Jibey]

He must be very pleased! Most wedding nights are a bit of a disaster, it seems to me... The verse jogged along like a ballad and it all seemed to happen according to expectations...

[Dye]

He tells me daily how pleased he is, so I must be doing something right. LOL

[Me]

Wonderfully sensual...flowed great, easy to read...great pic! loved it :) x

[Dye]

Thank you. You are too kind :)

[ron]

Oh I'm sure you dont ned him to see this one for you to get lucky. It seems that the both of you are so very lucky to have found each other. I truely am happy to see love, passion, and all that goes with what you two have. Its something I think poets try to write about, but here it is...you are living it. gondraulations to the two of you.

[KeeD]

So romantic, such a warm feeling.. Special day - perfect night - all because "I do" those words are timeless.. beautiful end to an excellent and romantic poem, did the hubby read this.. i'm sure he was on cloud 9!

[Dye]

Thank you so much....sincerely. I had him read it this morning, it went over well ;)