Think

Think

A Poem by Dy

Can you hear my scream?

Do you listen to my cries?

As you leave me to my sorrow,

just think of this;

You are breaking me

Sending me to madness

Casting me into despair

Listen to me as I crumble

That is all you have ever done

All you will ever do

Because as you lock me in this hell,

you also lock a piece of you.

You will feel the guilt

I will make sure of it

I will do all I can from my prison

You trapped me here,

in this prison of insanity

Will you still stand idly by?

That's what I thought.

© 2014 Dy


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Wow! A lot of your poems/writings are dark and emotional. You have a lot of material to work with, i think what would really bring out your writing, is if you could explain more details of whats happening in the poem/story.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dy

10 Years Ago

Thanks. I've been looking for ways to have what I write make more sense. It seems clear in my head t.. read more
Powerful poem. The strong emotion is felt in every line.
Revenge...is that the voice I can hear? Believe in Karma. How come there's a person who brings pain to another? Keep going.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dy

10 Years Ago

Yes, revenge is the voice in the back of my head. Keen ear.
This is such a strong message. while people are distributing hurt, they fail to realize that they are locking themselves in that hell as well. I love this

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dy

10 Years Ago

Thank you. People get too caught up in the moment of giving others hurt that they don't open their e.. read more

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Dy
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I will continue to speak even if no one will hear me, and I shall continue to write even if no one will read it. Quotev Profile: InsomniaticDy Current Running Stories: Him And Her (Cafe), and An.. more..

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