Something Is Missing

Something Is Missing

A Poem by WayzWithWordz

 

Hmmm something is missing

Something that has me wishing

I have scratched a bald spot in my head

In search of what is absent

I’ve looked under the bed

I’ve even examine the air vent

Threw everything off the mattress

Made a mess of my closet

rummaged under the bathroom and kitchen foset

poked around in the yard

resulting in slight blood shed

now my search has led

me back to the bathroom

but my cluttered mind has no room for pain

so this gash on my thumb is numb

I wonder now to look out a wet window pain

But all I uncover is a wet face

Puzzled because I’ve looked all over this place

I have my car keys, I’ve been retrieved the remote

those are not the reasons for my hunt

I now search for what I devote

So much of my time too

I only hope when I go missing you look for me as I look for you

A search that turns a busy body out of one who was lazy

A search that drives a phsycologist crazy

A search no longer for love, that hunt is old

I long for the one consoles my soul

So no longer will I torture my sight

i comb through the mess I made to find the phone

and to your job from this home

I assure my ears, and simply call you

© 2008 WayzWithWordz


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A search that drives a phsycologist crazy
A search no longer for love, that hunt is old
I long for the one consoles my soul
So no longer will I torture my sight

I really like these lines right here, this is very well written, like your style.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I was a bit lost as to what it is you were searching for, although that was the point...it turned out just the way I would've wanted it. The writing is a hair choppy in areas (but remember, there are no rules in poetry) I do love the line you ended on "I assure my ears, and simply call you" It makes the piece complete and in a very perfect manner. :D

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 16 Years Ago



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