A Reciept

 

A Receipt

 

"O can I get a receipt"

Words spoken at many stores

The purpose of this paper is clear

If satisfaction is not met, return it

So can I get a receipt?

On the way you treated me

I know I have up to a year

To get a refund on all those tears

So I got you and your accessories, can I turn it in

Back to customer service

Because I didn't deserve this

So before I can even begin to weep

I just remembered, I kept my receipt

Reviews

[S.J.Moore]

I liked the way you went about this.
It starts off one way and then you start to explain how your using it.
It turns into something more meaningful.
I liked it a lot.
I'm off to read another.
I'm officially addicted.

[Jofer Serapio]

Nice allusions and imagery. I like the way you made this poem entertaining. Keep up the good work.