Grand Mirror Shards

Grand Mirror Shards

A Poem by Daniel Valentine Rivera
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Written: May 5, 2016

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Change isn't made by the ones who are at peace, content and at ease. 
Change is made by the one who treat the stress and flaws as a disease.
Change shouldn't just be made by people in higher positions dishing out guarantees
For the ones who genuinely want to change the world, you need only say please. 

Chances aren't always enough, but can be  responsible for any miracle. 
Chances go along way, with every decision affecting at least one individual. 
Chances are what you make it, so attempt to make special, remarkable, and visible. 
How you view yourself is important too, so before you chance, make your intentions spiritual. 

Each one of us are just shards of a grand mirror, reflecting the earth as a whole. 
Separated, us shards mean nothing and can't project a picture to console.
Together, us shards can succeed in achieving the greatest good, lets make it our common goal.
In my eyes, everyone matters because each and every shard has a contributing and meaningful roll. 

The almighty genius behind the creation of everything I see would agree, 
That humanity has one universal moral, and that's to make the greatest amount people happy.  
Utilitarianism would make fade any all cracks in this grand mirror, even if it is an ethical theory. 
But whether it could use some polishing or it's fine the way it is, it's open to interpretation ultimately. 

I personally see my reflection in this mirror, and I can't pretend to like what I see. 
Like everyone else around me, I have high expectations, especially for me. 
There is so many things I should improve on, and so many things I want to be.
With that in mind, I believe those same ideas should be reflected onto our very own society. 

© 2016 Daniel Valentine Rivera


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Pretty ill say talented yet defined ...,love it
A grown sight unto society..and our being.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Daniel Valentine Rivera

8 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for the review. :)

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Hey I'm Daniel. I try to be friendly! I welcome your criticism and feedback. Anything and everything you want to say I will take into consideration so that it makes me a better writer. Enjoy.. more..

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