Toilet Bowls

Toilet Bowls

A Poem by Daniel Valentine Rivera
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Written: 03/18/14

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I know I've made mistakes and those mistakes made me.
In a place like high school there isn't many who could save me.
No matter how hard I tried, average grades is how they repaid me.
And even if I didn't try, those certain dick teachers never forgave me.

Yet I don't blame them simply because I didn't try my best.
I have to admit it was rare when I actually did study for a test.
But you still can't tell me my work isn't quality success.
I rather just drop out and become a stupid disney princess.

Does society really expect teenagers young and dumb,
To know how to achieve what they aspire to become.
I know it may be alittle feasable and obivious for some.
But I know for a fact that I can't be the only one.

I have no idea what I'm doing so I need you God to take control.
Put me on the right path please, do I have to say it in español.
Because no matter where I end up or no matter where I will eventually enroll.
I will always be nothing but s**t just in a different toilet bowl.

© 2016 Daniel Valentine Rivera


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hahaha i love this poem iit's funny but true

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Valentine Rivera

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the review! I like to be humorous when I talk about me failing at life lol.
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8 Years Ago

your a great poet so your aren't failing

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