Beauty Bar

Written: 12/11/14

It's a shame how high the beauty bar was raised for women in society.
So high infact it gives people like you princess the feeling of anxiety.
Beauty isn't specific because I believe it has a wider variety.
But I think your absolutely goregous and I mean that in complete sobriety.

I think it's facinating how your facial features are always on fleek.
Your captivating beauty is so immense it makes me feel weak.
You have a heart stopping smile that is as sweet as a kiss on the cheek.
In fact, every single detail about you catches my attention everytime we speak.

Out of every female in our school you have the loveliest pink lips by far.
Eyes filled with sparks that iluminate me like how im iluminated by a night star
I tell you these things to boost your confidence so you feel like you can reach this bar.
Trying to avoid saying things that would make you feel less than what you actually are.

With a face like that you never have to dress to impress.
Looking at it warms my heart and even takes away my stress.
It's like you have the power to have total control of me like a sorceress.
A simple 'you're beautiful' isn't enough which is why this poem is how I express.

I know your Insecurities of your apperance kill you in the inside.
But you completely hipnotize me every single time our eyes collide
Why not embrace your beauty because you have nothing to hide.
Becuase when you feel beauty within you, it shows from the outside.

Stoping hating your face, your body, your personality, and your quirks.
Learn to love them as much as I love you and ignore those worthless jerks.
When you satisfy yourself you satisfy me and believe me it has many perks.
Never depend on others for you happiness but try to depend on me only if it works.

Reviews

[Lilaa]

Damn. The flow was incredible. The meaning behind it is incredible. You are incredible. shookasffff.

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

Thank you for your kind review! I'm just as shook as you are!

[Zoya]

Haha, what a lovely poem dedicated to that special someone! She'd be over the moon after reading this I'm sure. The ending is kinda humorous, which provides an extra edge to this piece. Great work!

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

Thank you for your review and your kind words. :)

[Zoya]

No worries

[April]

Oh my goodness, this is so beautiful.

[pams poems]

i think it makes people feel special eyebrows on fleek

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Very awesome, I like it a lot. Thank you for sharing.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

enjoyed the first two stanzas. on fleek huh? i thought that was a really fun choice of words.