Reaching Stars....

Reaching Stars....

A Poem by *Rain*

I want to be remembered.

In a smiling sort of way.

And I want to be likened,

To a sunny sort of day.

I want to be cherished,

A jewel in a chest,

And I want to be noticed,

Shine above the rest.

I want to make a difference,

Save each starfish one by one,

I want to be seek the light,

Reach it blazing like the sun.

I want to finally live,

Moving past the scars.

I want to shoot the moon,

At least reaching stars...

 

 

 

© 2009 *Rain*


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I want to make a difference,
Save each starfish one by one,
I want to be seek the light,
Reach it blazing like the sun.

some very inspiring artwork.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice piece of art..
loved the poem..
Josh

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Love this! I love the night sky and everything that has to do with it. I love the message in this piece. Very well written and great poem! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is really nice.
I like it.
Great write.
-Elissa :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this. There are a few typos (one or two, but everyone has typos) but it was well written overall.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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