With The Moon, You

I said this was me being a hopeless romantic. I lied. I was being a hopeful one.....

Golden dreams of bright eyes,

Wake from a feeling that never dies.

A hero with a scar saves me again,

Pray tonight the dream won't end.

 

Fight the sun rise with all your might,

For all dreams fade to gray with the light.

The moon will guide me as the sun,

Follow its path until the journey is done.

 

The effects of the dream linger well into day,

Amber light remains to lead the way.

The hero will wait out the afternoon,

For with each night comes the new moon.

Reviews

[LSS]

Not being a sentimental, I still love this poem. Your rhyming is simple and easy on the mind, your imagery is exact and enables us to read your images, your musings transcend the surreal into life images that we all play with in our waking moments not to mention our dreams. Good job.
LSS

[Lyrical Love]

The moon will guide me as the sun,
Follow its path until the journey is done.
This was my favorite from the poem...
This a wonderful piece! Great imagery, nice flow,
a comforting read.
Kudos!!

[Vee]

i love this the imagery is amazing

The effects of the dream linger well into day,

Amber light remains to lead the way.

The hero will wait out the afternoon,

For with each night comes the new moon

its really pretty keep it up!!!!