Llandyra's Legend

A poem I started, attempting to be a bard, but I am stuck. I decided to post it, in hopes that after some advice, I can complete it.

Fire crackles, snuggle in tight

Cuddle under the blankets

Sit by the fire light,

And my tale I'll spin into the night......

 

The stars had gathered over the moor

The girl rode wandering toward the shore

Faltering with the reigns, unsteady and unsure,

Confused in a land she'd never seen before.

 

The dream said to come, destiny did await

And so quickly she left, her desires to abate.

She saddled up her steed, and walked out the gate,

 With head held high, she galloped forward to her fate.

 

A differing dream woke him from his sleep,

And feverishly he aimed for the ocean keep.

His horse nickered when the night grew deep,

But he pressed onward regardless of what might creep.

 

 

Author's Note

Any ideas on how the story should go? Any opinions at all?