Fog

Fog

A Poem by Dushyant Patni
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Tale of a winter's night.

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The fractured face of the moon
Manifesting the dead glow

Of the sun’s empty husk

Each probable and possible

Coalescing into one

Shadows of ghosts

That never were

Or ever will be

Murmur their stories

Disjointed and disconnected

Down the cobweb strewn paths

Dodging strands of memories

All is lost in the gray fog

Beads of mist

Shimmer with the orange spark

Of crooked street lamps

Glinting dully

On the darkness of the asphalt

That winds along

Into the haze

All is lost in the gray fog

Barred doors and dark windows

Staggering along

Immolating shards of souls for warmth

Banging against the inevitability

Of foolishness and folly

Corpses dance along

In their fleeting carnivals

Full of empty sneers

All is lost in the gray fog

© 2014 Dushyant Patni


Author's Note

Dushyant Patni
Trying to get back to my roots, with a minimalistic approach.

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I like the way the poem exudes an existential fog, how the fragmentation coalesces and then dissolves again into a fleeting carnival.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dushyant Patni

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
If you find the time, do read my other work as well, wou.. read more
Solar

8 Years Ago

Sure thing, once you review some of my writings too. That's what I like about this site - the excha.. read more
Dushyant Patni

8 Years Ago

Definitely, making my way there now.
And I agree, its mind-boggling how varied writing styl.. read more

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Tags: fog, winter, cold, december, darkness, mist, dark, alternate, reality, consciousness, freeze, heat, burning, sacrifice

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Dushyant Patni
Dushyant Patni

India



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Just another traveler trying to find my way in the enchanted forest of literature. I enjoy the company of superheroes, I find they give my mind a certain glow, I am obsessed with the apocalypse, becau.. more..

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