Infinity

Infinity

A Poem by Dushyant Patni
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We are all one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively.

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Roaring waves of joy

Rising on the endless ocean of hope

Warm rays of the sun

Caressing your face

On a boat made of wonder

With billowing sails of dreams

Following the stars

To wherever they may lead

Glimpses of distant shores on the horizon

Beckoning with the siren song

Notes of harmony weave their magic

Each strand of prayer

Weaving a grand tapestry of consciousness

Spirals of our personal little galaxies

Merging and dancing together

Whirling like dervishes in a sandstorm

Reborn with each breath

And die with each sigh

 

© 2014 Dushyant Patni


Author's Note

Dushyant Patni
May not be the best thing I've ever written. But was inspired by some of the greatest minds I have had the honor of encountering in my tiny life.

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HICKS, FTW!!!

I like your style and the views you have presented are in agreement with my own; similar influences perhaps. Have you read Rumi? If not do read 'The Essential Rumi'; pdfs are available online. I am damn sure you will like his interpretation of the world.
This piece flowed!
Great write, sir.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dushyant Patni

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your wonderful words.

And yes, I have read Rumi. Not a lot tho.. read more
Stonz P.

9 Years Ago

That is great...I began reading Rumi only over a year ago.. Influenced my poetry a lot.

read more



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HICKS, FTW!!!

I like your style and the views you have presented are in agreement with my own; similar influences perhaps. Have you read Rumi? If not do read 'The Essential Rumi'; pdfs are available online. I am damn sure you will like his interpretation of the world.
This piece flowed!
Great write, sir.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dushyant Patni

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your wonderful words.

And yes, I have read Rumi. Not a lot tho.. read more
Stonz P.

9 Years Ago

That is great...I began reading Rumi only over a year ago.. Influenced my poetry a lot.

read more
Not if its good or bad.
Divisions are for those who want Division.
It has the expression
that is.
What is.
I like it

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 27, 2014
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Tags: poetry, philosophy, consciousness, reality, cosmos, hope, universe, galaxy, death, rebirth

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Dushyant Patni
Dushyant Patni

India



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Just another traveler trying to find my way in the enchanted forest of literature. I enjoy the company of superheroes, I find they give my mind a certain glow, I am obsessed with the apocalypse, becau.. more..

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