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just a poem

You think you've got me?

But it's not that simple, you see

I'm not a piece of property

I only belong to me

You don't get to own this

Or know my bliss

Or steal a single kiss

You took your shot, but it was a miss

 

Author's Note

just something short and sweet off the top of my head..

Reviews

[Abdul Aziz]

Precise, and powerful. I have hardly read anything which is more unambiguous and direct than this.

"I'm not a piece of property
I only belong to me"
Though the lines are good, I think, maybe, they can be changed. They seem all too common :-/

I think this is a good poem. But you've written better ones!

[R E Tree]

This write sure is sweet and powerful. It shows your no one to mess around with. I like the serious attitude in this poem it's so dramatic.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Well i like it sweet and short

[A.Lee]

Nice. Short, sweet, and too the point. Nice work.