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just a poem

You think you've got me?

But it's not that simple, you see

I'm not a piece of property

I only belong to me

You don't get to own this

Or know my bliss

Or steal a single kiss

You took your shot, but it was a miss

 

Author's Note

just something short and sweet off the top of my head..

Reviews

[floarealbastra10]

very good

[logout]

very short, yet has a deep in meaning to it...
it means "don't mess with me" (for me, that is)... haha...
it seems that you have experienced this?
a good poem, i would say....

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

I am going through the same thing right now. It's so much harder though. Anyway, good poem. Can't wait to read more.

[SamBug]

Wow that was great. I can totally relate. Someone thinks they can keep a handle on you but they don't realize you're an individual with your own spirit and mind. This was very powerful. Great job!!!

[Indecisive and Loving I..]

Very short, very sweet, very witty :)
I liked it! I'm glad you can rhyme. I can't worth a poop! Very nice job, Dupree :) I loved it!!!

[Gomer LePoet]

I like this, never let anyone take you for granted when it isn't warranted.

[Dinesh Sairam]

Terribly sorry, I'm not really for 'Rap' kind of poems.. (According to me, Rap is not music, it's s**t!). But, your rhyming skills are awesome. Keep writing.

[Aggie Skeleton]

kewl. yeah, that is a word.

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

nice

[Daydreamer54]

great poem, i feel atttitude in this! i love it! :)