Serenity Lost

I had I thought.

That surely should please

most everyone, brought to there knees.

 

But as the wind drifts through the woods.

So my thoughts were taken,

to places beyond my vision.

 

Never will they be seen again.

Nor heard from,

to the very end.

 

But better for them to now be free,

than trapped for ever,

inside of me.

Reviews

[Omar Fendri]

ow wow ! the close is fabulous !! really fabulous
I like your obscure-poems
I should read every poem twice so I can understand it clearly and I still feel as there are many concealed truths behind your words which only you can explain it.
i like it :)