Genius

this is basicly my life

Breath in.

Taste the art inside you.

 

Release it.

Let it flow from you.

Watch it grow in front of you.

 

Let it craft its self into being.

Your body becomes the canvas.

Don’t be afraid, you can only hurt your self.

 

It is finished, show it off.

Let the world stare, like you don’t even care.

Like you ever had a choice, like it wasn’t this,

or nothing.

Reviews

[Robert]

i dont know why no one has commented on this, its a very well written poem. one of the ones that seems to just flow out of u. however if i had to critic anythign on it, it would be the same that i get on my own work. that u need to bring something more to what your doing. something fresh, make it more then something nice to read. but please dont take this as insult its purely from one poet to another :)

[Jim Lozkittle]

I like the prospective you put into this poem, looking at are as an object, when harnessed can be turned into something that you own.

[Hello, Goodbye]

Its a writers words to live by. I love the expression of the progress of creation. You have in brevity spoking much about the possibilities of our actions.. Great job in this piece.. If feels like something I would print out and keep as a reminder of inner feelings that I have felt before.