Leave Me Under

just something that had to be said

And now I’ve fallen,

Into the ocean.

An ocean of writhing words,

unspoken.

 

I float here.

Not surfaced,

nor sinking.

 

But I know,

were it sink or swim,

I surely would have drowned by now.

 

Unless of course.

I’ve died already,

and simply do not know it yet.

 

But then again.

There’s still a chance,

I have not even fallen yet.

Reviews

[Alexa Aiden]

If your words were edible, they'd be chocolate. A delicious, rich chocolate that you can't stop eating because you're too addicted to stop. Wonderful. :)

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I really enjoyed the feelings involved in this. Wonderful flow and structure as well. This is brillant and amazing!