I Am Free.

Am I free?

Or can i just not see

Everythings that happened to me

Wait I cant breathe

I feel a power from underneath

Is it possible for me to be seen?

For me to be heard?

No my existence is just a blurr

Im just an ordinary girl

I feel myself fading in the dark

As quiet as a childs play or a dogs bark

I need to be loud

I need to shout

I will not get lost in a dusty cloud

I do matter

I stand above the chatter

Don't try and shut me down

You stupid clown

because I am me

and I am free!!

Author's Note

Please tell me what i can change to get better (: Thank you

Reviews

[Steph K]

Quirky. Especially love the beginning and ending.

[Kat Collins]

Love the theme! Is the missing punctuation deliberate - an author's choice? It can be. :) I wrote a similar poem...must be something about women and wanting to be free and be themselves. Always a proclamation! Welcome!

[Safe&sound<3 ♫]

very, very insightful(: i love this. if you could add commas at the appropriate spots, thats pretty much everything you'd need! welcome to writerscafe(: