|Curious and Cautious|

Music to push down.
Excitement building.
Nerves overwhelming.
Sitting alone.
Joined together.
First time in forever.
Meaningless chatter.
Discovering our rhythm.
Remembering the past.
Combining the two.
Making new memories.
Nostalgic of seconds passed.
Closer and closer.
Small gesture sweetness.
Pit stomach heat waves.
Childlike hand touches.
Goodbyes are too soon.
The strain in each eyes.
The prolonged embraces.
Both are confused.
Both have hope creeping.
Both are so cautious.
Both are so curious.
A.L.

Reviews

[Daz]

Great poem. The flow is nice with the feelings evoked.

[carl]

That is a very clearly emotional piece . The choice of words and the structure both fit well together, you can sense the tension is palpable. obvious wonderment about a possible future "sitting alone but joined together. " nice work -carl

[A.L.]

Thank you Carl🤍

It is indeed a game of whether to hope or leave things behind.

[carl]

yes, well said