|In Between|

|In Between|

A Poem by A.L.


I’m swaying
Under warm rays
Filtered out through white
I’m intoxicated
Mostly by feelings
But a little is due to the wine
I’m confident and insecure
Tired of begging for more
Wanting to leave and explore
Caught in the in-between
A.L.

© 2023 A.L.


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Mostly feelings but a little bit the wine.
What a nice metaphor mixed to reality.
I felt this tug-of-war of emotions...
and wanting to leave and explore at the same time...that caught in-between feeling.

so nicely expressed in a poetic way.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Daz
This is quite a thought provoking piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Added on October 21, 2023
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