Little Brunette

Don't ask why, but in my head this is song by a Sex Pistols-esque band, except the end, which I imagine as Steriogram... I'm special.

Little brunette,
straight from the sixties
Flash me a look
She's oh-so-pretty
And you-
You haven't a clue
How she makes me feel.

Little brunette
I know that you know me
Little brunette
I know that you like me
Little brunette
I know that I
Want you-
Only you,
for all my life.

Little brunette
Pretty as the night sky
Little brunette,
I like the way it feels when I
Hold you-
Yes you,
and you hold me.

Little brunette,
we can be together
Little brunette
I can last forever
if I
have you-
when I
hold you-
And you
Yes you-
Little brunette,
I love you

Author's Note

Please critique the lyrics, and not the fact that my imagination makes it sound like a band you may or may not like or agree with my opinion on. Enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Sasha]

I did enjoy this. It's really endearing and the last stanza in particular was brilliant. I loved the repitition and the way it was so cleverly worded. It's reads wonderfully as a poem, but I wish I had the rhythm to go along with it. It'd probably sound even better to music.

[Musicbombshell19]

i've heard of the band and still think that this sounds beautiful to anyone who hears it.